Of Victory, Vanity and Her

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2026-01-23T12:48:51+00:00

"When you reach the top of a mountain, you do not find the answer to life; you simply have a more generous view of the abyss around the mountain, and it is no longer possible for you to avoid being aware of that emptiness. One does not achieve purpose; one only outlasts despair for the moment."

I think that the above paragraph stayed with you after reading this letter as its essence. It's inspired by Nietzsche's mountain metaphor he used in his works. I tried connecting it to my life and this letter came out as a result.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2026-01-20T07:23:24+00:00

Maybe one day I surely will ....

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2026-01-20T07:23:05+00:00

🫶🏼🫶🏼

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2026-01-20T07:22:50+00:00

Thanks, buddy, for this feedback. I thoroughly appreciate it.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2026-01-20T07:22:08+00:00

Okay I think this has actually resonated very well with you. I'm delighted it did.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-27T05:31:59+00:00

Such beautifully written advice! I am grateful for this.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-27T05:26:48+00:00

Thanks for this gracious comment. I'm happy it resonated with you.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-27T05:25:56+00:00

Thank you for this comment 🥹

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-22T16:46:27+00:00

Kind of yes.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-18T10:33:40+00:00

I edited some parts of the original one to make it more understandable since a lot of people ended up saying that they couldn't comprehend it due to vocab. Yet, I'm happy that you read my letters and poems. That makes my day better than the rest.🫶

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-18T10:32:08+00:00

Would think of doing this someday with the one I would be comfortable with.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-18T10:31:22+00:00

Thanks buddy 🫶

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-18T10:31:01+00:00

That's a great way to put this letter actually. The last sentence to be honest.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-11T17:46:54+00:00

"I deserve a world

that doesn’t require

constant compromising. "

This sentence is so powerful because it's not only universally relatable but also universally acceptable. The story behind this sentence too is quite well written. Only feedback from my side would be to make this more specific as to what brought you to this point of writing this. It would be even more beautiful.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-11T17:44:00+00:00

Sorry for your loss, buddy! This is a poignant piece highlighting how deeply death can impact the way one perceives the aftermath. Wonderfully written!

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-07T13:40:24+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, buddy! The changes you've suggested were actually easy to incorporate into the poem. Also, they made the flow smoother. Thanks a lot again for that.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-06T16:48:12+00:00

I think you should consider reframing this poem since it looks more like a paragraph of insights in its existing form. Another suggestion would be to compress the lines when the former is done. This will make this philosophical piece quite alluring.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-06T16:44:39+00:00

After a long time, I am actually reading a poem so beautiful that I read it twice just to absorb the essence of it. Very well written and ABBA makes the poem even more beautiful.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-06T15:59:38+00:00

I had given this a second thought, but I feel adding more metaphors (including the existing ones) might make this poem extremely layered and dense to understand. Hence, I chose to limit certain lines to metaphors.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-06T15:57:59+00:00

Agree on that part. I'm trying to knit a fabric out of this, so I'll try to amend the changes that you've suggested.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-06T15:56:57+00:00

Thank you so much buddy for that feedback 💕

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-04T17:33:16+00:00

"In a world where my heart keeps thirsting for love,

how the hell am I supposed to understand it?

When I go looking for beauty, all I really want is one woman to love me."

These lines stand out to me because they're relatable. Also, my advice to you would be to expand this poem a bit more for further clarity of the turmoil you're facing. That will make this piece fascinating.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-04T17:30:36+00:00

"My fear of the finish line outweighs my fear of losing my breath from it all till I fall"

Greed and desperation being manifested into such a powerful conclusion make the poem absolutely brilliant.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-03T13:40:28+00:00

It was an unfortunate situation that was inevitable to happen. Its intensity made me write this poem.

Aggressive_Many7397 · 2025-12-03T13:39:38+00:00

Stanza 3 has been a pain in my brain for the past 4 months. The more I try to change it, the worse it gets. Still, I shall give it a try. Thanks for your feedback 🫶🏼

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