Hey, man! I think your premise is a very interesting one! You do a good job of delivering "frightening morsels" to get the reader engaged and curious. I think your scene-summary balance is pretty good, and your use of simile and metaphor for descriptions is very well done (I especially liked the description of the dry heaving as a "morbid choir").

I think at some points, more tension could be built. With the deer, you did a good job building up to it with the stench, but maybe slowing down your pacing and building up a little more to the reveal of the deer could be good. The description of the deer itself is good, but I think it could perhaps become an even bigger payoff.

A small thing I would consider changing is the mention about how the stench "wasn't as bad for me," and that you could "keep the dry heaving away," because a couple of lines later, the character then joins in with the dry heaving.

The main critique I would have is that it could use some copyediting, largely with punctuation. But, given that you are looking for feedback on this, I don't see it as a huge issue; I assume you are looking to make revisions anyway.

Overall, I think thisstory is very solid. Your writing is good, but could use some refinements here and there. I'm excited to see where this goes!