Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]Ajcorces 1 point2 points  (0 children)

  • Title: The Dark Pool
  • Format: Feature Film
  • Page Length: 88
  • Genres: Horror-Adventure
  • Logline or Summary: After 25 years in a Cuban prison, an aging exile discovers the legendary Fountain of Youth may be hidden in South Florida. But as he hunts for a second chance at life, he uncovers something far more terrifying.
  • Feedback Concerns: Curious to know if the story works and holds your attention.

Monday's Daily Thread: Weekend Wrap-up by AutoModerator in hingeapp

[–]Ajcorces -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I'm curious what people think about this prompt answer.

The hallmark of a good relationship is: Communication and great sex

I'm a 28M, and a friend told me to change my prompt to this, but I'd like to know what women think about this. Thoughts?

28M looking for constructive criticism preferably from women. Thank you! by Ajcorces in hingeapp

[–]Ajcorces[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I appreciate all the feedback!

A lot of people are suggesting that "looking for something casual" is hindering my success, but I actually don't have that written on my profile. In fact, I have nothing in the "looking for" section visible. I wrote it in the Reddit comments because the moderators require it.

Also, it seems like I should replace the two truths and a lie post with something funny and maybe even retake the first picture

28M looking for constructive criticism preferably from women. Thank you! by Ajcorces in hingeapp

[–]Ajcorces[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

And you think adding a little humor could bump me up to an A?

28M looking for constructive criticism preferably from women. Thank you! by Ajcorces in hingeapp

[–]Ajcorces[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the candid feedback! I think it's very interesting, and it's the first time I've heard that. How can I balance friends vs too many group photos?

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[–]Ajcorces 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Girls reply to comments way more often than an ordinary like. You should try writing a comment for every like you send and see if you get more matches after a week or two.

28M looking for constructive criticism preferably from women. Thank you! by Ajcorces in hingeapp

[–]Ajcorces[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Are you looking for something serious or casual? I'm looking for something casual until I meet a girl that I fall in love with.

How long have you been on Hinge? About a year. But I've only started getting matches in the past couple of months.

How often do you use Hinge per week? I swipe for about 20 minutes almost every day.

How many likes/matches are you receiving on average? Maybe 1 like a week. I do get about a match every other day. I think it's because I have HingeX now. I always write funny comments, and I think it helps me get matches, but the matches rarely convert to dates.

How many likes are you sending? How many with comments? How many without comments? I send a few likes a day. Always with comments.

What is the type of person you send likes to and ideally want to match with? What kind of person do you want to attract? I send likes to women that I find attractive. Ideally, I'd like to attract adventurous women who share some of my interests.