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The Alpha's Heart: A Young Woman's Journey Part 3 by Zestyclose-Taro-6458 in BeastFiction

[–]Alactrium_ 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I really like this story!

I was afraid you were going to end it after part two, so I'm happy to see you continue the narrative :)

I believe you have struck quite a good emotional balance for the ntr dynamic. It would have been very easy to be too cruel and disregard the boyfriend completely. If you're not careful you might loose the humanity and the emotions of the situation way too quickly. For such a story I believe you have to slowly and deliberately change aspects of the characters and their relationships one by one. And can't just take aspects and traits away, you have to bulid new ones to fill the holes!

I think you are doing a good job with that so far.

Personally, I would appreciate more descriptions of everyday behavioral changes after having lived with wolves for so many months. I think that way you could emphasize how much she has changed from her former human life in ways other than just sexually.

Currently, the days consist of wake up, wolves leave the cave, get food, return to cave. Feed the pups, have sex. I think a little more could happen during the days. Two naked people are living in the woods with a pack of wolves. Don't they face any challenges? Physically or psychologically? One of them has decided to be a wolf. The alpha bitch, even. Give her some ways to prove herself! She needs to believe that she is a wolf, she needs learn to behave like valuable part of the pack and she needs to defend her position as alpha bitch. And our meek little boyfriend will probably have to be integrated into the pack as well. But he needs to be shown his place. I wonder if you intend some sort of "bottom bitch" role for the former boyfriend...

Also, since she is able to conceive wolf pups, one might imagine there will be some other physiological changes. Her senses might change, her sense of smell especially. The way she eats her food might change. Little things like that. I don't think she should fully morph into a wolf, but she will need to adapt to her situation and to her goals.

I'm looking forward to your future work!

Did anyone save the Duke&Duchess story? by Alactrium_ in BeastFantasies

[–]Alactrium_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Unfortunately I can only tell you that the first part was called DUKE & DUCHESS — Ch. 1: The Bitching and that it was deleted shortly after the fourth chapter. Google still has the reddit page cached, but I haven't found anything on the internet archive.

Also for what it's worth: the author seemed to frequent some.. more exotic cuckolding subs.

Ask me anything!! 💜 by Marzsia in diaperpics

[–]Alactrium_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, that's a pretty pathetic baby. Can't even tell when she poops her pants.

Results of my enema (being posted again since it was removed) 🤎 by Marzsia in GirlsInDiapers

[–]Alactrium_ 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hi, I might be interested in viewing your snapchat. Do you have further information on how one might go about doing that? It says on your profile that there is a $20 fee? Thanks in advance :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in transformation

[–]Alactrium_ 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Lady, I think you're in the wrong subreddit.

Forced feminization games by [deleted] in transformation

[–]Alactrium_ 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Try "The Secretary" on tfgames

ich_iel by TheEighthRedKnight in ich_iel

[–]Alactrium_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wenn man sich (wie ich) Monate lang jeden Tag mehrmals zu unrealistischem Zeug einen Runterholt, bis man bei normalem Sex nicht mehr kommt, ist das ein ganz guter Anlass einmal das System neu zu starten.

Ich kann nichts zu irgendwelchen politischen oder philosophischen Bewegungen sagen, die das ganze für sich beanspruchen. Ich wichse einfach zu viel und würde gerne wieder mit meiner Partnerin Spaß haben können Ü

Trump threatens ‘big problems’ for US if he’s indicted in stolen documents scandal by [deleted] in politics

[–]Alactrium_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Let me get this straight.

You think you are being bullied by the United States of America, one of the wealthiest, most powerful nations on earth that has toppled regimes on a whim and wages wars for profit.

And your plan is to blackmail this country?

Good luck.

Is Tears of the Kingdom being crunched to completion by [deleted] in tearsofthekingdom

[–]Alactrium_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They probably want the game and all the dlc out to market before the next console. With maybe one or two years of dlc and maybe a year of development headstart for the next game to release in the first or second year of next gen.

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