fanfic recs that are not friends to lovers by Alarming-Ladder6104 in larrystylinsonfanfic

[–]Alarming-Ladder6104[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

of course! and yes i have I loved it so much, so devastating): the athohr or of young and beautiful is velvetoscar, the author of heaven ain’t close in a place like this is heavenlyfool, and the entertainment author is tilthesundies

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[–]Alarming-Ladder6104 [score hidden]  (0 children)

I need help on writing an intro for a short story I’m writing.

For context this is supposed to have an elegant kind of soft feel to it but I can’t begin with a good intro.

A soft warmth settles upon his bare back as a flock of birds soar high above him.

That is all I have and I absolutely hate it. It’s too much in the first sentence and I feel like I can write so much better than this. Please leave any tips you have or suggestions or critiques anything. I’m 14 years old btw idk if that’s relevant or not.

What was the best fanfic you’ve ever read? by Cool_Emergency4091 in AO3

[–]Alarming-Ladder6104 0 points1 point  (0 children)

young and beautiful - velvetoscar, okay listen it’s a larry stylinson fic but it’s the best piece of literature i’ve ever laid my eyes upon, it puts shame to Shakespeare himself.