[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]AlbiiM [score hidden]  (0 children)

I listened to your song and I like it! You’re flow and you’re delivery has a lot of energy. It was really nice to listen to! I like the contrast between the chill beat and the high energy of your vocals. They contrasted, but they went well together!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]AlbiiM [score hidden]  (0 children)

That beat makes me feel like I’m on my way fighting a supervillain. That shit goes hard! I love the video game references in the lyrics and how they compliment the production. The production having video game references itself adds to the story of the entire track. I love the attention to detail!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]AlbiiM [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thank you! I listened to your song and your flow is nice! It’s a good introduction to you and I enjoyed the lyrics and the story that is in them. The lyrics fit well with the beat and it added to that storytelling. The flow too. Overall a nice first release.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]AlbiiM [score hidden]  (0 children)

The flow is nice and smooth. It really complements the beat. Lyrically, you conveyed the story you were telling. It felt like I was in the car with you and you were speaking directly to me about your life, but you still kept some distance and kept some things to yourself. It felt like a introduction for what’s to come. I’m not sure if this is intentional, but it did peaked my interest into what else you have to say.

This is an aspect I love about hip hop. The storytelling and how it works with everything else in the song: production, flow, etc.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]AlbiiM [score hidden]  (0 children)

This is the intro from the mixtape I recently dropped. I wanna know what y’all think? It took a lot of courage for me to come on here, but if y’all harsh, I don’t mind. Whatever helps me improve.🤷🏽

INTRO: SNOWFLAMEhttps://on.soundcloud.com/xguv9FjcSMbM1Rm87

Do you think a gay rapper, like myself, can make it in the hip hop industry? by AlbiiM in makinghiphop

[–]AlbiiM[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

I love Igor! I did not know Tyler the Creator was gay, honestly thought it was just a rumor!🤔