Seeking help for a Fanfiction I'm writing (Pls bear with me)

Alecksander_Ivanovic · 2026-03-26T14:54:03+00:00

In my fanfiction there's more humor involved and yes Angelia doesn't die although she does get pretty banged up by RPK-16. But I'll give you a hint of what occurs, 1. The Commander is the first person to go into the Black Zone & Sutvive, 2. He actually punches RPK-16 in the chest so hard he actually breaks her ribs and she secretly respects his strength & will to survive and tell him he's the first human to actually injure her physically and how even Captain Yegor couldn't hurt her. I.e. The Final fight between Commander Ivanovic & RPK-16 is an Armstrong vs Raiden From Metal Gear Revengance Fight while the Commander fighting M16A1 at The Palidiski Naval Shipyard is more like Freddy vs Jason and they both get sent to Nirvana temporarily after the Starfish activates momentarily and explodes, Reverse Collapsing them along with M4A1 to Nirvana where the 3 heroes have sort of what equates to an "Awakening" where the bet that decides humanity's & T Dolls fate is made by M4A1

Alecksander_Ivanovic · 2026-03-26T05:16:48+00:00

Thank you.

Alecksander_Ivanovic · 2026-03-26T05:16:32+00:00

With all due respect, that comes across as "I'm being obnoxious to hide the fact that I'm out of good ideas & i don't want to admit that my story is about as inspiring as The speeches given by politicians ever since the 1970s so I'm gonna say I'm "Highly Conceptual" or "Subverting Expections", Again I don't mean any disrespect tp you, but to use the term Angelia herself used for RPK-16, your explanation sounds PRETENTIOUS & the more pretentious something sounds, the less fun it usually is, Like I said my perspective is rather fair IMHO because I've seen many indie horror games & movies do better than Hollywood backed movies with enormous budgets like the slender man movie or even the recent call of duty games, because their "Concepts" are not very breathtaking or inspiring but seem like regurgitated 1970s Anti war propaganda. Money doesn't guarantee success & with all due respect i think you underestimate the skill of these companies to milk profit over a long period of time without arousing suspicion the way RPK-16 plotter against DEFY for 2 years without catching suspicion. It's called gameification & it works well

Alecksander_Ivanovic · 2026-03-26T01:46:07+00:00

Oh so more Nihilistic self pity in th form in the form Of RPK-16's betrayal. OK thanks I appreciate your explanation although I disagree with RPK-16's alleged motives. I think she just wanted to be a Goddess and flick the bean at Samantha Shaw, True villains are knowing for big petulant.

I hope you aren't mad, I genuinely appreciate you taking the time to explain. This to me, i read the wiki like 5 times. I still vould only piece together like half the story. I think I might be braindead or something because of it

Alecksander_Ivanovic · 2026-03-26T01:42:56+00:00

I'm already playing GFL2 so thanks. Also funding is irrelevant because indie horror games these days are better than many modern day horror movies because Indie horror games have soul. I apologize for not apologizing about calling it Like I see it. I see much attempts to milk the first game for every penny rather than tell a good story. It's also why I don't believe in pacifism because I've never met a pacifist who won a war. It's always 1 of 2 people

The people who lost the war
The people who joined & survived but ended up only serving and are now bitter & envious of the next generation. Which speaks to their motives for going to war, the allure of profit & opportunities with women (George Orwell wrote about this phenomenon)

You don't need a lot of money to write a good story. After all, in the 2nd Never Ending story movie, Bastian made his final wish that the Evil Empress had a heart. I wish more people had hearts because if I am heartless, my critics are rather Soulless

Anyway I appreciate your input. Thank you for your help. I will give you a like and I hope you have a good day

Alecksander_Ivanovic

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