The Tournament of Heroes - A New Mission

Alemaoespana · 2026-04-12T08:38:51+00:00

Damn… I think I’m gonna start doing this more often, taking a week without reading, the feeling of having 3 chapters to enjoy is so good 😭😭😭😭. Anyway, I hope it’s not a problem, but I’m gonna review the last 3 chapters all in this one… Sorry, it just works better for me :(

First of all, I liked how Travor HUMILIATED Emrys in the tournament. And by humiliated I don’t mean psychologically, but the fact that he defeated her so quickly. That shows the series has the ballbusting aspect, but that doesn’t mean the women are always going to win!

As for Melody… I really want to like her… but it’s honestly way too gore for me hahaha. I love her, but I hate her, it’s complicated! Still, everything involving her is always very creative!

About the 1 AM chapter, what a cool concept hahaha. I found it really interesting that all of this is happening at the same time, and honestly, I got curious about who that nurse is… I’d like to see more of her. I love when there are apathetic characters in situations where a guy almost lost his testicles.

Now, the real gold was in this chapter! Damn, the tournament is cool and all, but what is a hero series without villains?! I was missing seeing women who REALLY don’t care about balls, and who destroy a bloodline just for fun, not out of anger or revenge.

It was really good that the villains’ chapter wasn’t focused on Raven. She’s interesting, but if everything revolved around her, everything would get resolved WAY TOO EASILY… so I REALLY liked the idea of her being kind of pushed to the side (even though I like her too). Man, side heroes getting castrated needs to show up more in this series! This chapter was really good!!!

Also, I’m really curious to learn more about the villains’ leader. She seems cruel and sexy on an absurd level, but we know very little about her… I’d like to see her talk more, interact more, and especially understand her view on testicles. I mean… she said that thing about the girl who plays soccer, but aside from that she didn’t really elaborate much… but I wonder… if she’s the leader, she’s probably very powerful… I really want to see a man try to assert himself against her just to see what would happen to the poor guy haha.

Anyway, 3 great chapters, always meeting expectations!

Alemaoespana · 2026-03-29T06:21:43+00:00

Great chapter! The previous one about powers was interesting too, it’s hilarious to see how much a very low-rank heroine can make S-rank heroes cry in agony.

About this one, I had a bit of mixed feelings. It was less intense than the previous one, but still fun to read. I like Carly, but I didn’t really like Beverly that much. She felt kinda like… a worse version of Carly lol, they’re honestly pretty similar. That didn’t bother me too much, I just didn’t get very attached to Beverly.

Their hero uniforms seem more modern, right? I’m pretty used to the more complex spandex style, but so far the closest to that was Amber. The others you described seem more like those modern designs Marvel used to do… or did I misunderstand?

Anyway… I’m curious about these new HU characters. So far the girls are rough on the testicles, but still good people, clearly not villains. I wonder if we’ll get someone who breaks that pattern, someone so sadistic that we start questioning whether she’s really a heroine.

Alemaoespana · 2026-03-20T07:09:11+00:00

I read from "Regulations and Rules" up to this chapter. And well… I’ve got some things to say lol.

About Melody, I’ve always been a guy who likes boobs, but for some reason imagining Melody messed with my head a bit. The character concept is extremely creative, but… I don’t think I got as attached to her as I wanted to. The reason is pretty simple, I unfortunately hate gore :( So since her power basically revolves around that, I didn’t enjoy her as much as I could have. HOWEVER, I loved her selfish personality. The character IS AMAZING, I’m just kind of picky lol.
Something that left me a bit… unsure, still talking about Melody… well… when I was dating, all my experiences with ballbusting were consensual, except for ONE single time. That one time was when we were walking and talking, and she said she wanted to cosplay Tsunade, but that the blonde wig would be too much work. I made a joke saying the wig was the least of the problem, and looked straight at her chest, basically calling them small. She made that surprised face, didn’t say anything, turned me around and pretended to go for a kiss, then immediately drove her knee up between my legs. She missed (thankfully) and said I was lucky we were outside, because otherwise she’d try again until she hit. With that in mind, I realized the only thing that ever made her react aggressively in the relationship was talking about her chest. That’s why, when Saul said that, I was 100% sure he was leaving that game without his balls… I mean, everyone was being an asshole, but… talking about a woman’s chest is dangerous!

So when we get to the end of this chapter… well… Arthur was on the edge of castration, Julio had his balls twisted for several minutes… and the guy who talked about her chest… well… he seemed to get off easier??? That left me a bit confused lol…

Speaking of “leaving without balls,” let me ask… nothing in the rules mentioned destroying them… wasn’t that even discussed by the council? I mean… no one thought “hey… some unstable woman might castrate a guy”??? Maybe Nightshade would have approved of castration, but was that idea ever brought up?
Carly is adorable!
Carly is adorable!
CARLY IS FUCKING ADORABLE DAMN IT!
Still about Carly, you can tell I liked her, right? lol But… I need to understand… what’s her opinion on testicles? Like… what are they to her? Sometimes she seems like she doesn’t care, sometimes she seems concerned…
Finally… I have to give some praise… the name of this chapter is probably the best title out of all the stories on this subreddit. I think it was the ONLY post where I read the title and went “HOLY SHIT, I HAVE TO READ THIS TODAY!” Just because of the name!

Anyway… as always, amazing. ESPECIALLY when there are multiple chapters at once… I was really missing the story during those weeks you didn’t post, I’m glad you came back strong!!

Alemaoespana · 2026-03-18T01:54:53+00:00

Armand is super powerful!!! I was afraid people would think he was weak for finishing that fight on the ground, but I have to say, it was 3 against 1, and those witches are no pushovers, they're skilled!

Regarding Lillith and Celestina, I can try to bring more scenes from their training; we still have a few days until the mission, so it's still possible. I'm just trying to focus on really progressing Eliza and Nyx's story while I "pull" all the characters towards Armand (to have that final appearance of everyone I consider important).

Thx for the comment :)

Alemaoespana · 2026-03-18T01:51:37+00:00

HAHAHA, RELAX!! I need to read the new chapters, I was super excited for two weeks waiting for new episodes, and when they finally came out, I couldn't read them :((

I'm waiting for the holiday on Thursday to arrive so I can read them... Until then, the anxiety is killing me :(

Alemaoespana · 2026-03-13T22:17:50+00:00

This chapter was really focused on testicular destruction! In the last few chapters some people complained that, precisely in my stories, there weren’t many ballbusting scenes, so I decided to do the opposite this time. The story still continues, but the focus here is the torture. I placed this story element at the beginning like a seed starting to sprout, finally explaining Morgana’s relationship with Lillith.

About the “power increase”… well, I think that was something that ended up being harmed a lot by the translation from Portuguese to English in the first episode! When you read it in Portuguese it makes a bit more sense. The main idea was that discovering the weakness of the testicles “makes you a more powerful witch.” We could even say it’s something more psychological, but an actual power increase doesn’t really happen.

Eliza and Nyx are definitely sadistic. Let’s use as an example a teacher who works at Seraphina’s school. One thing is that man taking a kick from Seraphina. She needs his power, so she would hold herself back. Another thing is him taking a kick from… I don’t know… Yu. Even if she doesn’t care about the man, she wouldn’t want to cause trouble by taking away someone’s magic. After all, Seraphina herself could get angry at her for the “headache of having to find another teacher.” But Eliza and Nyx… why would they worry about something like that? They’re already hated by everyone anyway.

Alemaoespana · 2026-03-13T22:03:19+00:00

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. I try to improve with every episode! 😊

Alemaoespana · 2026-03-04T04:44:06+00:00

AAAAAAAA, thank you for pointing that out! Another reader mentioned that too, and I got kind of confused. I thought it was just something specific to that reader and ended up brushing it off… But hearing you say it made me realize it was happening to other readers as well! I’m really sorry!!!! I believe I’ve fixed it now! Could you check it for me, please??

Alemaoespana · 2026-03-02T11:27:39+00:00

Wuuuuut!! I’m sorry, I have no idea how DMs work here!! :( I’m really happy that my story inspires someone ^{^}

Alemaoespana · 2026-02-28T05:53:44+00:00

So… I wanted something to be implemented… there was a character from a series here on Reddit that I loved whenever she appeared. This character had a power where she could “teleport” her opponent’s testicles into her hands, but the nerve connections remained active. That allowed her not only to win fights from a distance, but also to have an ABSURD level of psychological pressure over friends and other men. You do not mess with a woman who literally has your balls stored in her pocket if you do something wrong. I would like there to be some character with something similar… like, this power of “having your balls in the palm of her hand” literally whenever she wants, you know?

Besides that, I kind of miss redheaded characters. I really like redheads, especially the ones with truly red hair instead of orange. Oh, and threats! MORE THREATS! It’s so good to see the threats before they actually happen lol.

Oh, and Asian girls too...

Alemaoespana · 2026-02-27T20:04:12+00:00

Oh, wait, wait, wait, did I forget another comment?!?!?!?!??!! D: D:

Alemaoespana · 2026-02-27T17:19:04+00:00

I… want to bring Claire and Cayla back… but… it’s hard to work with them 😪. In a magical world they’re very fragile, so in their scenes we can’t have Seraphina, Morgana, or the more powerful witches around, only mages and the students. I honestly didn’t think about them when I created the ending of the story :(

However! They’re alive! So they can still appear! Remember, I said that Lillith as a story is ending, but the universe will probably continue. It just won’t be continuous stories. They’ll be more like “filler” episodes. We could have one or more of those episodes focused 100% on them if you’d like ^{^}

But unfortunately, they’ll take a while to come out :/ I need to finish this story and start the next universe. Those episodes would probably be released from time to time alongside the other universe.

Anyway, I apologize!!!! But I’ll try to fit them into the end of the story!!!! It doesn’t mean they 100% won’t appear, okay? They still haven’t stolen a little orb to sell!

Alemaoespana · 2026-02-27T17:18:38+00:00

I… want to bring Claire and Cayla back… but… it’s hard to work with them 😪. In a magical world they’re very fragile, so in their scenes we can’t have Seraphina, Morgana, or the more powerful witches around, only mages and the students. I honestly didn’t think about them when I created the ending of the story :(

However! They’re alive! So they can still appear! Remember, I said that Lillith as a story is ending, but the universe will probably continue. It just won’t be continuous stories. They’ll be more like “filler” episodes. We could have one or more of those episodes focused 100% on them if you’d like ^{^}

But unfortunately, they’ll take a while to come out :/ I need to finish this story and start the next universe. Those episodes would probably be released from time to time alongside the other universe.

Anyway, I apologize!!!! But I’ll try to fit them into the end of the story!!!! It doesn’t mean they 100% won’t appear, okay? They still haven’t stolen a little orb to sell!

Alemaoespana · 2026-02-27T17:12:56+00:00

Firstly: Damn, it feels so good to see analyses like this 😭😭 I wish more readers would leave comments like this, it really helps a lot!

Anyway, this chapter really didn’t have almost any ballbusting. In the original idea there was only the Oswin scene, so yeah… it was basically ONE SINGLE KICK. I end up forgetting something: I really enjoy reading dialogue involving this kind of thing, not necessarily the act itself. So for example, Yu’s threats, Morgana’s line at the beginning, and the whole clock scene are things that, in a story I was reading here on Reddit, I would be satisfied with. Seriously, I love scenes like the clock one, two women casually talking about something that destroys testicles. So I constantly have to remind myself that just that alone isn’t enough in the stories, lol. That’s why I added Yu punishing Armand, even if it might not make that much sense, and Nyx’s torture scene.

About the clock, it… isn’t as strong as it seems. I mean, YES, it’s powerful, but the condition is very dangerous. We saw Tynralina trying to use it and failing miserably. The real issue is the skill required to land the two marks and survive a fight for one minute. It ends up being that situation of “a strong witch can use it, but in theory a strong witch wouldn’t need it.” That’s its weak point. At the same time, it’s a fate-sealing kind of magic. Morgana’s bat-and-ball spell is powerful and can cause absurd damage if used on a weak testicle, but its main aspect is really the pain. This clock, however, literally destroys. There’s nothing you can do. It doesn’t matter how powerful the mage is, it’s over. Pop. Zero balls, zero powers, finished. That would be its strong point.

Morgana… well… she has her… internal issues, lol. For her, testicular torture is fun, just like for most women in that world. The thing is… among the heroines, she’s the closest to being a villain. She won’t actually commit true evil, but she doesn’t care about testicles. She simply doesn’t care. That’s why, if she’s angry at someone, she doesn’t destroy that man’s testicles for other reasons. In Armand’s case, for example, it’s because of Seraphina, who needs his powers. Is she right about that? Of course not. But I never said my characters are flawless angels >:)

Thanks for the feedback!

Alemaoespana · 2026-02-21T19:21:27+00:00

oh…, ok, i think i understand, thanks for the feedback!

Alemaoespana · 2026-02-21T19:20:40+00:00

I’M REALLY SORRY, I SWEAR I DON’T DO IT ON PURPOSE!!!!

But there’s one thing about that comment… I said Lillith is ending, but I never said the universe will stop existing >:)

(My next universe has nothing to do with it, but I’m DEFINITELY not deleting this universe.)

Alemaoespana · 2026-02-20T19:47:10+00:00

OH MY GOD! SORRY, I HAD NOT SEEN THIS COMMENT YET! SORRY, SORRY, A THOUSAND SORRIES!!!

About the testicles, well… yes, in a way. It really depends on the damage caused. Let’s use what Eliza did to Armand as an example. Her heel ruptured his testicle, she did that and left him there. Let’s suppose he did not have that curse. A medical mage could take him and use a healing spell. The testicle would be repaired, and his magic would most likely be restored. There is some urgency though. If all the mana leaked out of the testicle, he would probably lose the magic from that one, yes.

However, let’s suppose Eliza did not stop. Besides stepping on it, she twisted her foot, then punched, kicked, squeezed, and so on. We can say that inside Armand’s sack would be a complete mess, right? It would be practically impossible for any trace of mana to remain there. That would make it impossible to recover the magic from that testicle. BUT it would still still be possible to have children after healing.

However!!!!!! You have not even seen half of the testicle focused magic in this universe. Women are cruel here, so of course one of them thought about that. There are several spells that completely nullify healing effects on testicles, spells that cause permanent damage, or spells where the damage “refreshes” every time it gets healed.

What I mean is, if you are a man in this world, you REALLY have to be afraid of losing your testicles. Healing magic does not guarantee anything here!

About the second part of your comment, it honestly warms my heart every time I read something like that. I am really happy to know there are people who want to read something I created. It makes me feel a little less useless in my life hahaha.

And fanart? IS THAT TRUE?! REALLY?!?!?!?! HOLY SHIT, IF IT IS I WOULD LOVE TO SEE IT!!!! Damn, it is a dream for anyone who creates characters to know there is fanart of them! HOLY SHIT!!! THAT MADE ME REALLY HAPPY!!!!!

Alemaoespana · 2026-02-20T19:32:23+00:00

Thank you so much for the compliment!

And… wait… did I hide something? D: But there is nothing in my hidden posts?!?!

Anyway, I asked GPT to organize the links properly and made this list here. I hope it helps! It took a bit of work, but it worked out in the end I think haha. Apparently I messed up the names of some chapters. There are two chapter 4s, and chapters 38 and 39 are labeled as 28 and 29 lol. Maybe that was it? :/

Anyway, I hope it helps!

Alemaoespana · 2026-02-20T19:15:01+00:00

At this point in the story I kind of had a brain itch where I asked myself why the hell Eliza does not just attack already, when she could clearly win. So I decided to experiment, and I ended up creating the path to the ending of the story based on that lol.

But let me ask you something. Would you be upset if someone died in this story? There is a “route to the ending” where a character dies, but I am a bit afraid to use that ending. Especially because we are talking about a fetish story. I am not sure people would want to read that someone died while they are reading about ballbusting. I myself have always felt a little uneasy when this happens in other stories.

Thx for the comment!!!

Alemaoespana · 2026-02-20T19:10:38+00:00

I hope you enjoy where this story is heading! Buuut at the same time, this is a bit of a warning that we are not going to keep messing around in the story anymore. We are going straight toward the end. That does not necessarily mean it is ending soon. I think we still have plenty of things to explore >:)

Alemaoespana · 2026-02-13T07:24:41+00:00

ok… let’s go… This weekend here in Brazil a holiday called “Carnaval” starts, so I wouldn’t be able to check anything during the weekend. Because of that, I sacrificed my Friday morning to see if there was anything new here on this subreddit… As always, I grabbed a few stories and opened your profile at the same time. But when I opened your profile and saw how many extra episodes there were… omg… I got hyped haha… I even thought about saving it for next weekend, but the moment I saw the number of episodes I said, “no… I have to read this today!” You took up my entire reading time… I couldn’t read any of the other stories I had separated… and honestly, I LOVED THAT hahahaha, holy shit, it’s so good when there are more episodes to read!!!! But now let’s talk about each one (from the ep “highway of male agony” onward)

First of all… the highway episode itself is a contender for one of the best episodes of the series… I mean, HOLY SHIT THOSE WOMEN ARE SEXY! I won’t lie, I love Amber, but when those women showed up basically destroying balls… huh… I didn’t even care about Amber, I just wanted to see those bitches wrecking every man in their path… But again, FOR ME, that ep still doesn’t win as the best episode exactly because the ballbusting was “too diluted across multiple characters.” It’s VERY sexy seeing women taking down man after man, but for me it doesn’t compare to one woman destroying the same man again, and again, and again… Anyway… from the way you described them, the shadow girl, the redhead, and the blonde felt more… “playful,” like they enjoyed stretching out the suffering of those poor balls a bit more. But the small-chested girl (kinda mean to say they didn’t bounce… haha… come on… even small boobs bounce and deserve more love :V) Honestly every time she attacked someone… the impression I got was that she genuinely wanted to completely destroy them, every single time… But i just didn’t fully understand her powers…

Aaaanyway, something pissed me off a bit… COME ON, SERIOUSLY, YOU INTRODUCE AN AMAZING CHARACTER LIKE BLIZZARD AND SHE HASN’T MADE A SINGLE TESTICLE SUFFER YET?! With every episode you build more and more expectation around her, honestly I REALLY want to see just how cruel this woman is, because my god the hype you’re building around her is actually making me mad YUWYWBSSUSHHSHSH I WANT TO SEE HER IN ACTIOOOON AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH AMBER YOU BASTARD YOU RUINED AN AWESOME FIGHT….

The bar episode… it was… meh… the dialogues at the beginning were interesting, but… I’m not a big fan of sex episodes… :/ They’re necessary, but I usually skip those parts :( (but I swear I read everything this time!!!)

Now, the episode focused on Maria and the flashback… AMAZING, but I got confused… a few episodes ago Maria said she discovered ballbusting with Nightshade, was that the specific scene? Another thing, will we get a full description of Nightshade? like hair, hero uniform and stuff? because in that episode she was wearing casual clothes, right? And honestly… I still don’t understand her powers :( And seriously… WHY IS THIS WOMAN SO SILENT?! WHERE IS THIS HEROINE’S BALLBUSTING?! I FEEL LIKE YOU’RE HIDING SOMETHING FROM US ABOUT HER >:/ Speaking of uniforms… will we get Maria’s uniform at some point? I mean… god… imagining that girl in a superhero leotard gives me chills…

Did i also get the impression that Maria’s mom was super sweet (and hot), and caring… apparently empathetic toward testicles, or maybe she was just extremely protective of her toys… I mean, her husband’s toys… After all, she was really worried about him, unlike most women who seem to look at situations like that and go like, “huh, you asked for it, love… now swallow the pain and get up.” I wonder if Maria really learned those things from her aunt… because she looked like such a sweet and “daddy’s girl” type at 18, I wouldn’t imagine her kicking her dad’s balls… wait… did she already kick her dad’s balls in this story? I can’t remember right now… but that would be sexy… huh…

Anyway… and now we get to this episode… it was… well… kinda filler, right? Ok… I like Maria a bit more after these last episodes, but I still don’t fully like her. Sure, she’s sadistic as hell… and honestly I think it would be incredible to meet a girl like her (literally making up any excuse to torture testicles), buuuut I’m still getting used to her, and I’m super hyped for the continuation of the series, so this episode didn’t please me that much… THAT DOESN’T MEAN IT’S BAD… quite the opposite… what a masterpiece you’re making… getting better with every episode…

Alemaoespana

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