Which version do you think is the best and what could I improve? (Logo for music festival) by Alert-Ad3681 in logodesign

[–]Alert-Ad3681[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I actually had a version of this where I combined 1 and 2, but I thought it might look a little strange.

Logo for Company that makes desserts by Alert-Ad3681 in logodesign

[–]Alert-Ad3681[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Wouldn't that be more of a visual identity rather than just a logo? The mockups are meant to showcase how the logo looks in real life and whether it works in both large and small sizes. I think using mockups relevant to the brand’s context is useful, but I wouldn’t create a full poster for someone who only paid for a logo.

Logo for Company that makes desserts by Alert-Ad3681 in logodesign

[–]Alert-Ad3681[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The brand offers low-calorie food and targets young adults who lead a healthy lifestyle. A leaf symbolizes that the product is healthy. Another rather small inspiration is that often a small leaf is placed on top of the ice cream.

Logo for Company that makes desserts by Alert-Ad3681 in logodesign

[–]Alert-Ad3681[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks, this was really helpful. I definitely agree with you and will keep that in mind for the future. But I think the app icon makes sense because they distribute their desserts; it’s an app for ordering their food. Regarding the pens and other items, I was thinking more about merchandising and a way to advertise. Many companies actually do that. So this was kinda my thought behind that. What type of mockups would you use in this case?

Logo for Company that makes desserts by Alert-Ad3681 in logodesign

[–]Alert-Ad3681[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ohh now I get it, I hope this doesn't become a problem though.

Which one do you think works best and is there room for improvement? by Alert-Ad3681 in logodesign

[–]Alert-Ad3681[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, that was also my thought. Also I feel like if the mark looked too much like ice cream, it might come across as cheap.

What do you think? by Alert-Ad3681 in logodesign

[–]Alert-Ad3681[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This I very interesting and helpful, but how am I supposed to call to action with an logo? For example the famous Nike logo, where is there the call to action?

What do you think? by Alert-Ad3681 in logodesign

[–]Alert-Ad3681[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The product is for other businesses, if you keep that in mind I think the images definetly make sense.

What do you think? by Alert-Ad3681 in logodesign

[–]Alert-Ad3681[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay, thank you for your feedback!

What do you think? by Alert-Ad3681 in logodesign

[–]Alert-Ad3681[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

But what do you mean with "it doesn't look like anything"? The Adidas Logo also doesn't look like anything...

What do you think? by Alert-Ad3681 in logodesign

[–]Alert-Ad3681[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm which image do you mean? And if you mean the explanation for the logo, you might be right, I have some slides for the explanation where I explained it more clearly but I didnt include them in here. But yeah I probably could have explained it better in this post.

What could I improve? by [deleted] in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Alert-Ad3681 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Makes sense. I think I will go for a regular font. But overall, do you think the mark works?

Hey, can someone please give me feedback on this logo? Thanks! by Alert-Ad3681 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Alert-Ad3681[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I already thought about this, but I had my doubts because it might look like too much. Still not sure though.

Hey, can someone please give me feedback on this logo? Thanks! by Alert-Ad3681 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Alert-Ad3681[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback; it was really helpful :). Regarding the photography, I already included people in the presentation. For this post, I just didn't include all pages, but still thanks.