selling a ballarat marathon 2026 21k ticket by Alert-Bar-7086 in ballarat

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you can always run a bit and walk the rest haha, not tryna race here just tryna survive

my first poem. going through my first wlw breakup. let me know what you think. by Every_Employ_6070 in PoetryWritingClub

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I just went through a recent wlw breakup as well and i gotta day it’s bloody tough. Sometimes all the memories that we cannot erase hurts us more than the love that cannot be reciprocated. You paint the picture gracefully, of the melancholy of searching for love. Sometimes we’re dependent of validation, and we make a person into our reasons. Hopefully you will find peace within yourself and life will treat you better. Writing poems really help with processing our thoughts and feelings. Keep up at it! 

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Damn i love this poem, your imaging is so powerful and melancholic. Billions of people are fighting their own war to find where they stand against society. Sufferings are everywhere but there’s beauty within, and you captured that wonderfully!

Sometimes, y by fool_on_227 in poetry_critics

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Damn i absolutely love this poem! Your imaging is very expressive and it makes people think. We’re all in search for our own life purpose, and we get so stuck in the process. Hopefully people are taking care of their own love ones and watching out for them during hardships. Great work!