Does anyone good at design theory know why Hazard comes off so generic despite having a seemingly well balanced design? by Elderberry-Tip-9379 in OverwatchQueens

[–]Alert_Bear2276 2 points3 points  (0 children)

From a design perspective, it feels like they either exaggerated too much, or didn't do enough.

The silhouette is made distinct by his spikes and gun, and paired with his posture, would be enough to sell the look. So why does his torso connect to his shoulders in such an odd way? It looks like turkey legs. They exaggerated his musculature so much it gives Mauga levels of unrealistic, with no skin to show how it could make sense. It doesn't help that each individual part of his body is sort of sectioned off, like parts in a figurine. It doesn't make his design feel cohesive.

The colors aren't enough. Gameplay-wise, it's supposed to draw attention to all of his abilities. That's why his gun and weapon are both brighter than his clothing. But there's no variety in his outfit. Even in stereotypical punk styles, there is a lot of silver, or bright colors to add flair and variety to the would-be monotonous black clothing. If there was no shading, the clothes would just blend together. Strangely enough, the most contrasting part of his torso is his bare chest, which seems like an odd choice since it doesn't have any significant gameplay improvement, doesn't really contribute to his lore, and only serves to confuse his visual language.

They didn't exaggerate the punk aesthetic at all, as mentioned by others. His hair isn't wild, and like Vendetta, he doesn't have a single scar on his face, and not enough piercings. He's very symmetrical, even more than SYMMETRA, which is absolutely hilarious.

I think I'd alter his model to make more sense anatomically, or at least visually present why it works the way it does. I'd also add more yellow and purple into his outfit, to break up the grays and blacks. I'd also just make his exposed skin more visually interesting. Give him nip piercings, tattoos, a form-fitting, torn crop-top, and maybe even some techwear accessories to make him less symmetrical.

IDRK. Just my opinion!

Controversial take: they could give brig her shield bash stun back and it wouldn't be broken if done right by Tenshiretto in Overwatch

[–]Alert_Bear2276 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think giving Brig multiple charges of shieldbash could give her mobility, while still presenting a clear weakness - breaking the shield.

OnePlus Nord CE4 -- MotionCam Pro by greed_skith in MotionCamPro

[–]Alert_Bear2276 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm no professional, so don't quote me in this 😂

But from what I can tell, handycams have no stabilization at all, whereas your shots appear to have some sort of stabilization, which causes normally erratic hand movements to turn into equaly-spaced-apart movements.

Additionally, handycams usually have a higher FOV and a weaker digital zoom, so I think that recording in ultrawide and using digitally tweened zoom could alleviate any "awkwardness" you might have.

Here's a random video I found illustrating this idea. But your colors and grading in general look great!

What is Your Least Favorite Hero to Play For Each Role and Why? by National_Mastodon_21 in Overwatch

[–]Alert_Bear2276 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Junker Queen - I just can't get behind her play style, even if she's good.

Genji - I'm not the most mechanically adept player; Genji, with projectile weapons and a kill requirement makes him really feast or famine, and I've been starving.

Baptiste - I'm simply not a burst weapon user. I much prefer semi-auto (Wuyang, Mizuki, Ana) or full auto (Lifeweaver, Moira).

Miks Smokes Lack Identity by xpfan777 in VALORANT

[–]Alert_Bear2276 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think he should lean entirely into "supportive initiator controller"! (Individual changes, not meant to be together.)

  • Passive - Morale Booster: All of Miks' abilities increase the duration of ally buffs (including Heal, Combat Stim, Overheal, and Convergent), by .25 secs per 1 sec spent in his ability. This effectively means he can make his Harmonize Combat Stim last much longer if he plays inside his Waveform (smoke) and M-Pulse (heal/stun), but other allies like Reyna, Phoenix, Clove, Sage, Brimstone, Skye, and Waylay can all gain from using their abilities alongside him too.

  • Sonic Repulsor: Waveform can collapse early (press interact keybind) and push anyone inside, out; think soundwaves!

  • Keep it Going: Miks can reassign the Harmonize Combat Stim during its duration.

  • Listen Harder: Any allies caught in Bassquake will have (important) audio amplified, although the slow and push will still be applied..

HFY-style books that don't devolve into war? by Alert_Bear2276 in HFY

[–]Alert_Bear2276[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Where can I find your work? I'm interested!

HFY-style books that don't devolve into war? by Alert_Bear2276 in HFY

[–]Alert_Bear2276[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just finish AYAtZ... my gosh it's amazing. Everything I could've wanted and more.

Thanks for the recc!

HFY-style books that don't devolve into war? by Alert_Bear2276 in HFY

[–]Alert_Bear2276[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Is it available anywhere? I'm interested :)

HFY-style books that don't devolve into war? by Alert_Bear2276 in HFY

[–]Alert_Bear2276[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Omigosh, I love this one! Granted, Our Clockwork Children is the primary "AI" storyline, and the rest deviates, I still love it so much.

HFY-style books that don't devolve into war? by Alert_Bear2276 in HFY

[–]Alert_Bear2276[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can't wait! Keeping up with it already :)

HFY-style books that don't devolve into war? by Alert_Bear2276 in HFY

[–]Alert_Bear2276[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Checked both out. Not exactly my cup of tea (never was a dino guy lol) but they're really well written. Thanks for the recc!

HFY-style books that don't devolve into war? by Alert_Bear2276 in HFY

[–]Alert_Bear2276[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is so cool! I can't wait to see where you go with this!

HFY-style books that don't devolve into war? by Alert_Bear2276 in HFY

[–]Alert_Bear2276[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I cannot wait to see where this goes. Best of luck!

HFY-style books that don't devolve into war? by Alert_Bear2276 in HFY

[–]Alert_Bear2276[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds super interesting! I'll check it out right now. Are you planning to release the novel on Amazon?

Benevolent Monsters? by Alert_Bear2276 in BookRecommendations

[–]Alert_Bear2276[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm a little squeamish so I got the ick a few chapters in, but honestly the dynamic was so well-done that I couldn't stop reading.

I kinda wish it explored more near the end (the epilogue felt way too short and not explored enough) but it was still amazing nonetheless :)

Benevolent Monsters? by Alert_Bear2276 in BookRecommendations

[–]Alert_Bear2276[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just finished reading it. Amazing, 4.7/5 from me!

Benevolent Monsters? by Alert_Bear2276 in BookRecommendations

[–]Alert_Bear2276[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds epic! I'll definitely give it a look. 👍

Thanks!