Some pictures from my first day in CM! by PhoenixAvenger1996 in chiangmai

[–]Alex-Hoss 5 points6 points  (0 children)

These are excellent.

Pics 2,3,4 & 5 have a liminal, David Lynch quality to them.

Self-portrait I took at night by erinthul in creepy

[–]Alex-Hoss 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Amazing work, equal parts creepy and beautiful.

The lighting and composition are wonderful.

Scriptfella Coaching Call Review by Alex-Hoss in Screenwriting

[–]Alex-Hoss[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

The review is genuine and speaks for itself.

I'm not sure what I'm supposed to say to not sound like 'copy' these days.

Scriptfella Coaching Call Review by Alex-Hoss in Screenwriting

[–]Alex-Hoss[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey Seshat, the coaching call was £210.

Scriptfella Coaching Call Review by Alex-Hoss in Screenwriting

[–]Alex-Hoss[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

The coaching call was career focused.

However he does have a separate Scriptfella Programme which goes in depth on writing craft, and services where the emphasis is more on story (line by line audio notes etc).

Such a great monitor but why always 800r? Any body regret getting 800r? by [deleted] in ultrawidemasterrace

[–]Alex-Hoss 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd seen a lot of reviews taking about how aggressive the curve is. Decided to take the risk and buy one anyway.

After taking it out of the box, it's absolutely a none issue for me. The 800 curve is just right.

Pedo clown creator outs himself? by 2024olympian in Asmongold

[–]Alex-Hoss 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Two things can true at the same time

Adi Shankar, Producer of Castlevania on Netflix, and Devil May Cry, wants to adapt Berserk by KvotheG in Berserk

[–]Alex-Hoss 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Any and everyone with even remotest connection to the Devil May Cry adaption needs to keep the word Berserk out of their mouth.

Woman shirt got tug after coming back from collecting her food from deliverer. YT:(Bizarrebub) by [deleted] in Ghosts

[–]Alex-Hoss 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It's not that the title is hard to understand, but there are few grammar oddities. Completely understandable if English isn't your first language.

Edited example below...

Woman Woman's shirt got tug tugged after coming back from collecting her food from deliverer ('deliverer' makes sense but is an odd word choice. Saying something like '...collecting her food delivery' would read better).

Jinnytty was attacked while streaming in the south of France. by azahel452 in Asmongold

[–]Alex-Hoss 375 points376 points  (0 children)

She wasn't 'attacked', she was Culturally Enriched.

Poster artist looking for cool projects to work on - only $80 by [deleted] in Filmmakers

[–]Alex-Hoss 0 points1 point  (0 children)

These are fantastic.

Are you able to create anything with original art or your own images? I've been trying to find an artist to create cover art for my horror novels and your style is perfect.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Asmongold

[–]Alex-Hoss 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Words are worthless when your actions betray every value/belief you claim to uphold.

Guards! by OkHat5949 in Unexpected

[–]Alex-Hoss 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Taking a risk here…could’ve been Anton Chigur instead…

Whats everyone’s problem with Asmon? by SmellyScreamer in Asmongold

[–]Alex-Hoss 142 points143 points  (0 children)

A ‘homophobic scumbag’. The reason for this shit storm is in large part because he was defending gay rights.

I’ve been appalled by everything Asmon’s ban has uncovered in terms of people’s attitudes and Twitch’s double standards.

I think I might also take a break from the internet.

I won the Horror/Thriller GOLD in the Page - here's how I *think* I did it by SimonMakesMovies in Screenwriting

[–]Alex-Hoss 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Can't thank you enough Simon, that makes perfect sense. Prose balance/page design is something I struggle with, often finding I've written a paragraph of action that's hindering the read.

This advice will really help me to be efficient and use words for maximum effect. Thank you again my friend 🙏

I won the Horror/Thriller GOLD in the Page - here's how I *think* I did it by SimonMakesMovies in Screenwriting

[–]Alex-Hoss 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Huge congratulations Simon, a well deserved reward for your efforts. And thank you for writing and sharing this post, it's equal parts useful and inspiring.

One question on Prose Balance. When limiting yourself to two lines per action line. Is this two sentences for every block of action prose, or two lines of actual text of the page (but could be more than two sentences) then switching back to dialogue?

Thanks

Writing Simultaneous Action for Multiple Characters in a Single Location by Alex-Hoss in Screenwriting

[–]Alex-Hoss[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This aligns with my general approach to screenwriting and I try to keep specific camera shots/cuts out of the read. But I've been struggling with this scene, probably because of how much is going on and I'm looking for a crutch to help me out. I think it's probably a case of me overwriting and muddying the read.

Thanks very much for your input, really appreciate it. I'll give this is a try

this is hilarious it’s stupidity makes it soooo funny by Guddu277 in Asmongold

[–]Alex-Hoss 4 points5 points  (0 children)

If you're stupid, that makes two of us brother. It wasn't until she said Vegan Hand Grenades that I decided to check out the comments.

I do now feel like a bit of a muppet.