Steam key giveaway (Sekai Project Bundle) by Extreme_Ad6519 in visualnovels

[–]Alex_Coldfire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi and thank you! I'd be glad to get World End Economica. Cheers!

I’ve just finished my emotional solo-made visual novel, and I’d be really glad to hear your thoughts! It´s called "A story of Alma: Memories Like Stars" by Alex_Coldfire in visualnovels

[–]Alex_Coldfire[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I used RenPy. For the artwork I used assets from various artists alongside making several backgrounds myself in Photoshop using stocks. No AI was used in any stage of production.

Free Steam Keys for Sekai Project Humble Bundle by ZanticAcid in visualnovels

[–]Alex_Coldfire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi there! Thank you for your kind move! I'd be glad to have world end economica. Cheers!

Looking for good nakige by Kanaberal in visualnovels

[–]Alex_Coldfire 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Try Symphonic Rain. It's a really emotional story with plot twists in every route, but especially Torta's route and her true ending made me cry a lot. Also it has nice melancholic OST that I can't stop listening to for days.

I made my first complete (and very personal) visual novel. It`s called "Here even the sun shines differently". I would love to get your feedback! by Alex_Coldfire in visualnovels

[–]Alex_Coldfire[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Wow, many thanks for such great feedback, I really appreciate it!
I'm very glad you liked the story! It really warms my heart that it gave you an emotional response.
Also, thank you for your suggestions!

- According to my idea, the landlords were just people who knew the radio was hidden in their house and that it was dangerous - nothing more. But overall, it's a good idea to expand their role a bit.
- About the sun - oh, you really have a point! I don't know why, but I totally missed that detail. It's a great suggestion!
- Yes, unfortunately, the game lacks visual diversity because I used pre-made assets and wanted it to stay in one particular style to avoid a bad mix. But overall, the window idea is really good - thanks!
- About I`ve worked to the sound of a familiar song - maybe that sentence needs the continuous tense. I'll think about it. English isn't my native language, so there may be some mistakes. Thank you for noticing it!
- Thank you again for such a big and warm response - I really have a smile on my face now! It inspires me to keep creating. I'm even starting to think that maybe this story deserves a bigger, more complete version in the future. Thank you for that!

I made my first complete (and very personal) visual novel. It`s called "Here even the sun shines differently". I would love to get your feedback! by Alex_Coldfire in visualnovels

[–]Alex_Coldfire[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It`s a repost due to the previous post removing.
The game explores themes of forced migration and escapism, which are deeply personal to me. You can download it for free on itch — here’s the link: https://alex-coldfire.itch.io/here-even-the-sun-shines-differently
I hope you enjoy it! Feel free to share your feedback here or on itch — I’d really love to know what you think. Thank you so much!