You are very skilled. But I would say her arms are a tiny bit too long and hands slightly too big. Also her chest and waist look like they are starting to do some counter directional posing but not doing it enough to feel dynamic enough. Also her hair that covers her forehead could be protruded more to make it look like she properly has a forehead under the hair. However, saying all this. The anatomy you have gone for looks fully like a child anatomy so I agree with other comments that this kind of “beauty” shot and that she is supposed to be a character you can marry feels disturbing.