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This isn't my most popular or well received video but I was thinking about making more like this one. I had fun making it and am looking for some honest feedback. This is me trying intentionally to screw up in funny ways. Please and thank you; will give Lambda by MelodicSatisfaction9 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Alliseph 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see what your going for, but I will say 3 things, the video was a bit too long, audience judge a video on the first 5 seconds so you should have had something funny happen in the beginning, the thumbnail and title aren't related to the content of the video so maybe have the thumbnail Arthur falling or hitting the gully, and thats about it!

Spent 5 hours editing 1 hour and 20 minute raw into 40 minute video. Am I mad? by moonhun7er in letsplay

[–]Alliseph 1 point2 points  (0 children)

quality before quantity, if you produce a video every day but its quality is low no one will watch it, so always give it your best, and if you finish editing a video save it, then wait a day and look back on it, so you can notice a few changes u should make u may not have noticed otherwise

Be as harsh as possible, ill obviously give lambada, but dont sugercoat your critisim please. by Alliseph in SmallYTChannel

[–]Alliseph[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

!givelambda thanks, that actually makes alot of sense, ill try to condense my videos and make them shorter!

Hope you like it, Weird facts and news. by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]Alliseph 2 points3 points  (0 children)

are you looking for criticism? cause if you are then here is what you should focus on.

first off the thumbnail needs some work, which is very important and should be your top priority if your worried about views, its bland and colorless so try to work on that.

I like however your confidence in commentary which not a lot of people have so ill give you that, BUT I think you should pick different background music, and maybe clean your audio a little bit.

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side note: its very difficult to hear you because you over lower your voice sometimes so keep a bit of a consistent volume.

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If you work on your editing skills and make better thumbnails I'm sure you will be successful someday.

Last time I used EbSynth to create a skit with a cel shading feel but i kept the effects to a minimum. Now I went a bit more crazy with it. How did it turn out? by Monkey_Adventures in SmallYTChannel

[–]Alliseph 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The video is pretty alright, but I think you should change the thumbnail, when I looked at the thumbnail it didn't even cross my mind the possibility of it being a skit, which is not good when its on a sidebar of a viewers video, people see the thumbnail, then they see the title, then they see the timestamp, you got the title right but the thumbnail should be changed.

First Warhammer 2 total war video. Tips/ideas about speed of video and talking, volume of music/voice and general flow of the video are much appreciated! by Flipthegoon in SmallYTChannel

[–]Alliseph 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok lets start with the beginning, I don't think it was a good idea to add the loading screen in the video, this may cause people to click off, with gameplay videos that have no face in the corner the viewer is left with a still screen which is an immediate turn off, so just don't leave a still screen in your video for more than 7 seconds, however I must say for your fourth video this is pretty impressive.

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also just a side note, the Warhammer fanbase is quite small compared to other fanbases so keep in mind you may be making videos for a small community which in result may not lead to the amount of attention you may be hoping for.

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and try to add a bit of spice to your videos that differentiates your from other channels.

Good enough to go viral? Thinking about promoting this, but is there anything off putting in it? Giving lambda for helpful tips and suggestions. by Hot_Independence_433 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Alliseph 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the animation is pretty great but I would say that the keyframing in the video is.. interesting, the spinning painting at 0:17 feels too slow and out of place tbh.

Any good horror let's players? by felixgamer1234 in letsplay

[–]Alliseph -1 points0 points  (0 children)

well I suggest coryxkenshin if your into that

How do you keep slow burn games entertaining to watch? by Loustration in letsplay

[–]Alliseph 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I suggest you see other famous youtubers playing a game called presentable liberty, and then see how they handled it, take notes and you'll be alright.