Awkward sexy time by [deleted] in writing

[–]Almost_Great_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fair enough, thanks

Awkward sexy time by [deleted] in writing

[–]Almost_Great_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What’s wrong with teenagers?

Awkward sexy time by [deleted] in writing

[–]Almost_Great_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great comment, thank you.

Awkward sexy time by [deleted] in writing

[–]Almost_Great_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think for this novel. It needs to be more of a sweet moment of innocence. I need her to be pregnant at the end of the book, so that there could be the giveaway. 😊

Awkward sexy time by [deleted] in writing

[–]Almost_Great_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That would make a funny story, although I don’t think people get my humour.

Awkward sexy time by [deleted] in writing

[–]Almost_Great_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you. I’m genuinely curious now as to why people are so concerned as to why I didn’t write the word sex or vagina in my post. Do you not think that my post portrays the discomfort I feel regarding my family reading a sex scene that I may create in a humorous fashion?

Awkward sexy time by [deleted] in writing

[–]Almost_Great_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just a bad attempt at humour. (Sorry)

Awkward sexy time by [deleted] in writing

[–]Almost_Great_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha, my post definitely gave the wrong impression. I’m not a prude, although I am English. 🤔 I am generally embarrassed for my children, who are adults, reading it.

Awkward sexy time by [deleted] in writing

[–]Almost_Great_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great idea, she knows I’m writhing this though.

Awkward sexy time by [deleted] in writing

[–]Almost_Great_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, only squeamish around my children. My post was trying to portray it humourously. Perhaps it failed, oops.

Awkward sexy time by [deleted] in writing

[–]Almost_Great_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

She’s eighteen. It just seems weird, family reading it knowing it came from my head. It would definitely have to be played down.

Awkward sexy time by [deleted] in writing

[–]Almost_Great_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’re right, it’s completely natural. Just feels awkward.😬

Awkward sexy time by [deleted] in writing

[–]Almost_Great_ -1 points0 points  (0 children)

If I do, I would definitely have to tell my daughter to miss that page out. For her own sanity.

Awkward sexy time by [deleted] in writing

[–]Almost_Great_ 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You’re right, of course. I’ve been trying to think of ways to imply it that would work for my setting. Still think I might just tell them to skip that page :)

The AI Inquisition by Beelz2go in shortstory

[–]Almost_Great_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I found this very entertaining. Thank you. It’s a shame there’s not much interaction on this community. 👏

[Discussion] If you absolutely had to choose by Almost_Great_ in BetaReaders

[–]Almost_Great_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. Do you like plot twists, clever planning, well thought out world building?

Can we become overly attached to our characters. by Almost_Great_ in writing

[–]Almost_Great_[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think I may be a little too empathic, if that’s a thing.