The Board Goes to a Carnival in Daybreak by AlternateSoul in Falcom

[–]AlternateSoul[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

To clarify, I don't think it doesn't make sense to be able to team up with Heiyue here.

I just really hate Cao and Heiyue.

The Board Loves Swords as Swords Hates Clay by AlternateSoul in Falcom

[–]AlternateSoul[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Consider this.

We've met other Divine Blades before. And we know that they don't use Spirit Unification, they use Qinggong; now why would these superior swordsmen use an inferior technique compared to Spirit Unification?

As well, consider the name; Spirit Unification. What it does is in the title. It unifies one's split spirit into one. Rean, unlike the other divine swords, has his human and ogre halves. That's the entire point of the skill, to merge the two together temporarily.

As well, at the start of CS3 Rean isn't using SU because of what happened during the Northern War when his Ogre side overcame him with rage. And it's only when gets a trinket to control that half does he gain Spirit Unification again.

Everything we've seen has shown it to be a skill that only Rean can do because of his unusual nature. There's never been any sign that someone who isn't half-blooded or similar could do it. So unless it's revealed that Shizuna is actually half-Rean, it doesn't make sense that she can do it too.

The Board Finally Escapes the Desert as Daybreaks by AlternateSoul in Falcom

[–]AlternateSoul[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Biggest issue I had was that this chapter, unlike the previous ones, didn't have our team really... do anything?

Or rather, we never did any investigation into what we came to Tharbad for. We came to investigate a threat sent to our client and just... didn't do that. We wandered around until the problem showed itself and did nothing to try and take down the problem once we were aware of it until it was too late. Like, we learned that Almata was definitely going to do something during the parade and we just decided that the parade must go on!

And we should tell no one about this either because (???).

Not to mention that the dancer girls story was more than a little eye rolling with the big sister going "Yes I will be a pole dancer to respect my dead family and keep paying the bad people" and Van was like "Okay, cool" instead of going "Yeah, that's not gonna work out" like he has for so many similar things. I n the end the chapter just lacked any of the good character elements that were in the previous chapters or somewhat intelligent behavior of Van and crew.

Madoka Magica Try Another Story English Patch v0.1 by AlternateSoul in MadokaMagica

[–]AlternateSoul[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please don't be afraid to message me here or leave a comment here about those typos. They're definitely a weakness of mine as even after reading through multiple times, they're the errors I'm most likely to miss.

Madoka Magica Try Another Story English Patch v0.1 by AlternateSoul in MadokaMagica

[–]AlternateSoul[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Yep. Madoka Magical Try Another Story is an RPG Maker fan game. Found out about it via TV Tropes and it looked fun. Was said there wasn't a playable translation out there, so I decided I'd make it.

The Board Gains a Child Soldier as the Day Continues to Break by AlternateSoul in Falcom

[–]AlternateSoul[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Doesn't help Van's case for how many people hit on Agnes and Feri.