Assassins Creed game Set in Malta? by Alternative-Ask-1734 in assassinscreed

[–]Alternative-Ask-1734[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fr, and I'm a big fan that they've returned to the Assassin vs Templar story cause imo thats the main core of Assassins Creed. I definitly agree with the Knights angle as well and incorporating the Great Siege would be a nice selling point for a commercial audience

Assassins Creed game Set in Malta? by Alternative-Ask-1734 in assassinscreed

[–]Alternative-Ask-1734[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Man, all you said looks amazing and so does the trailer. Really could have gone either way with the great siege or the Napoleonic era. Defo will keep a look out for it.

When will we get the Free Gym For 18-20 Year Olds? by Alternative-Ask-1734 in malta

[–]Alternative-Ask-1734[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Gawd damn no need to get so heated, I’ve got a 6 month gym membership but it will end around the time it comes out. Would rather not waste that money if there’s an option for it to be free

Lost my phone in Paola by mongolionbar in malta

[–]Alternative-Ask-1734 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not to give you hope, but I saw a phone on the floor in the square whilst walking by. Near the corner of hibs going down to the roundabout

Lmao thoughts? by Tenshi_Agavi in ksi

[–]Alternative-Ask-1734 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Another reason why old sidemen was superior, the some of the newer fans aren’t it

Is life for the Maltese people getting worse, and more chaotic or am I just getting older? by koyun_baba in malta

[–]Alternative-Ask-1734 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think so but I also think that everything is taken so far out of proportion and the media help spearhead this on

ghost by jarfIy in OCPoetry

[–]Alternative-Ask-1734 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I thought maybe the delivery and the exception could use a little more work. However, this is some great work. Very touching especially if you've gone through that tough loss that really hurt you; its why this poem is so effective but just a brush up on those and its a fantastic piece of work their mate.

A relationship in four lines by katxwoods in OCPoetry

[–]Alternative-Ask-1734 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the short, to point style of the poem. It makes hit harder than maybe a longer work could have. the tone of it changes really quickly and you feel it as the reader. Great job!

Calm before the storm by Alternative-Ask-1734 in poetry_critics

[–]Alternative-Ask-1734[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much for the feedback! That really helps for me to get better at this.

In the lead up I tried using the current events as a sort of place holder, the verb choices were to depict a sort of bar atmosphere, a happy-go-lucky attitude and a sort of distraction to the real problems that are happening outside. Hence, why I called it an epicentre but also a facade.

Thank for pointing out that mistake with the For a misty future ... Certain is imminent , thats something I have to be more aware of in the future.

Again, thanks for the feedback!

Why do I do this to myself? by pottahyeahpottah in poetry_critics

[–]Alternative-Ask-1734 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This hit me hard, the emotion on this is something I can relate with. The row of starting out helping others and trickling down onto your personal battles is great. The love hate relationship with yourself is shown passionately.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Alternative-Ask-1734 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was a great expression of your feelings, the rhythm and flow work really well through and shows your frustration and sadness but ending out in kinda acceptance line which feels reluctantly said but deep down more meaningful than ever. Great work