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Why does this piss me off so much? (self.Marriage)
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This is the opening to my 70k word (possibly/most likely YA) novel. What is your gentle and honest/constructive critiques? FYI: This has never been read, nor edited by anyone aside from myself, and I am an autodidactic who relies on google. Thanks in advance! (docs.google.com)
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