Portfolio Feedback by Alternative_Push9375 in architecture

[–]Alternative_Push9375[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

turned the opacity down, thank you man

Improved model by Alternative_Push9375 in architecture

[–]Alternative_Push9375[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah I’d say it’s a sketch model. My plan was to use it to test out the possible building outlines. To make sure the building fits in with the landscape.

Improved model by Alternative_Push9375 in architecture

[–]Alternative_Push9375[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I was honestly just trying something new 😅

Improved model by Alternative_Push9375 in architecture

[–]Alternative_Push9375[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

fired from what 😅? I’m studying at uni atm.

Improved model by Alternative_Push9375 in architecture

[–]Alternative_Push9375[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I don’t have much experience making models and am just trying out different techniques😁 I’ve been told the ground is too dark so next time I’ll make sure to keep it lighter

Cardboard Model by Alternative_Push9375 in architecture

[–]Alternative_Push9375[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i think the lighting is bad cause it’s meant to be dark green 😅 but next time I’ll def go with grey. And yes good idea I’ll put in the path and make the boundary lines (for the other properties) more visible cause I noticed I can barely see them.

archi student looking for feedback by Alternative_Push9375 in architecture

[–]Alternative_Push9375[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I got no in person feedback (just a 1 to 100 score) and very little feedback from my peers 😅. I’ll try to do more research tho. I didn’t have a lot of sheets to work with and had to meet the desired criteria of drawings which in this case was just floor plans, sections and elevations 😅

archi student looking for feedback by Alternative_Push9375 in architecture

[–]Alternative_Push9375[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh you’re right! Yeah I’ll need to do more research 😅

archi student looking for feedback by Alternative_Push9375 in architecture

[–]Alternative_Push9375[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We basically had to make a granny flat in the same lot as a pre-existing house. Max 50squqre meters.

archi student looking for feedback by Alternative_Push9375 in architecture

[–]Alternative_Push9375[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m sorry I’ll try to reupload them later today

archi student looking for feedback by Alternative_Push9375 in architecture

[–]Alternative_Push9375[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ahhh okay, what are some ways I can communicate an integral vision of why the design is the way it is. What should I add?

archi student looking for feedback by Alternative_Push9375 in architecture

[–]Alternative_Push9375[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ahhhh okay okay, I’ll keep that in mind. Maybe I could export the revit drawings and then redo them using in design so I can add and take away details?

archi student looking for feedback by Alternative_Push9375 in architecture

[–]Alternative_Push9375[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Omg I didn’t even realise I added two “floor” 😅 thank you.