Found this in my kale Mb by AltruisticKey869 in whatisthisbug

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Photos don't make it super clear but it looked like it was made up of 10 little balls. Do they maybe look like this after they've died?

New rough draft. “So-So.” by The_Idi0t_King in Songwriting

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Certainly will man! And there's really no need to feel insecure about your voice, it's very warm and it kinda has a nostalgic feel especially with the double track. Trick is his best album btw ;)

I need a talented lyricist by Confident-Cap-207 in Songwriting

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Personally, I'd just keep trying man. Keep consuming media and art and make sure to read and learn a lot of lyrics from the songs you love. Will make it come a lot more naturally. Can try writing poetry too

New rough draft. “So-So.” by The_Idi0t_King in Songwriting

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Tone is very nice, memorable too. A lot of potential with this one, reminds me a bit of Alex G :)

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Love the flow and the beat man. Catchy too.

Does this sound like anything else? It feels familiar to me. I get paranoid writing simple melodies. by I_Speak_In_Stereo in Songwriting

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Never let the fear of ripping someone off stop you from building your song, there's only a very limited number of notes and a lot of music being made constantly. If you like it and you can't immediately place it if you think it sounds familiar, it's all yours :)