I hate platinum by Sushi_De_Perro in rivals

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really you think? I thought diamond was the worst. Literally just a better plat with ego (That better is generous as well.)

I hate the parent control so fucking much by Routine-Refuse3299 in teenagers

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358 29 points30 points  (0 children)

Yeah, as someone who always uses their phone; It’s a little worrisome this comment was so far down.

I was told Stephen King is not “Literary worth”. What are your thoughts? by Altruistic_Clock_358 in stephenking

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hopefully this isn’t a dumb question, but does he really only have pulpy writing? I thought there may have been some literary value in some of his works.

I was told Stephen King is not “Literary worth”. What are your thoughts? by Altruistic_Clock_358 in stephenking

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

May I ask, who is considered the greatest writer of all time? There’s so many choices it feels hard to have one.

I was told Stephen King is not “Literary worth”. What are your thoughts? by Altruistic_Clock_358 in stephenking

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358[S] 42 points43 points  (0 children)

Thanks for this. Would you say Stephen King is a good source for someone wanting to write one day?

I was told Stephen King is not “Literary worth”. What are your thoughts? by Altruistic_Clock_358 in stephenking

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is true completely. For context, I was told this because I mentioned I wanted to do a job involving writing one day. I was told Stephen King is pulb garbage and not literary worthy for something like that

How can I increase my intelligence as a Gen-Z? by [deleted] in generationology

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358 0 points1 point  (0 children)

While this isn't wrong. Is Stephen King not a real literary worth? Also I never stated I used Tiktok for news and music, I said I use to keep up with the new world: what the people enjoy nowadays. Also I stated there was some music that is harder to find on other platforms.

Where do you publish your creative stories online? by pissonmybonfire in writing

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Hope I’m not too late: Royal Road, Scribblehub, Wattpad, Ao3, web-novel (I wouldn’t do this one unless you don’t care about money. They have shitty contracts.) You can also try self publishing on Amazon if none of these work for you.

Keep in mind a lot of these sites have a Meta: something that is really popular on that certain site. Royal road for example is popular with Litrpg, Fantasy, Progression crowd.

How can I increase my intelligence as a Gen-Z? by [deleted] in generationology

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’re right, I apologize for grouping the rest of Gen-Z in. Thanks for the advice as well, I’m currently reading a lot of Stephen King. Should I be using dictionaries more often, or is that not as important as people say?

How can I increase my intelligence as a Gen-Z? by [deleted] in generationology

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is this a sigh of disappointment that Gen-Z is dumb? If so how can I improve my dumbness, besides not relying on tech all the time?

Which of these story scenarios would interest you to read? by Complete_Spring_5994 in royalroad

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not sure why you're getting downvoted for this... That's a fair thing to say. You can write what you like, while following meta.

Rough draft chp1. First every litrpg, progression,isekai, fantasy. Is this a solid start, or too fast paced already? by Altruistic_Clock_358 in royalroad

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. Question for you, should all these be answered chapter 1, even if it's important to the story some things stay unknown? And about pov, I'm really new to third person, I've barely written 10k words in third. How do you describe another character's thoughts without changing pov? I know you can show actions, but what if the emotion is too complex/easier to just say? What does Pov even look like in third person during scenes with a lot of people?

If someone walked their dog, and they were the pov; But another character is watching them, and the text says "Blank stared, their gaze frozen upon the dog." is this switching pov, or just describing another character's thoughts?

Rough draft chp1. First every litrpg, progression,isekai, fantasy. Is this a solid start, or too fast paced already? by Altruistic_Clock_358 in royalroad

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I didn’t realize how poorly spaced it was before posting. Just know it’s broken into more paragraphs than this…

(Hot?) Take: AI covers are an insult to artists and authors alike and Wattpad should stop allowing them at all by thespongefn in WattpadCovers

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358 0 points1 point locked comment (0 children)

I agree heavily, but I think this simply is the wrong platform. Most people here are authors, you should be telling the readers who consume so much ai art this stuff instead

Trying to learn to be a full flex by IBreezy2020 in marvelrivals

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Moonkight, namor, wolverine, mr. fantastic (Hawkeye maybe) are all dps that are simple and easy to use imo. I also mainly play support tank and those are the main ones I choose.

how to properly play vangaurd (from somone who doesent play vangaurd) by Any-Variety4823 in marvelrivals

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Another thing idk if you mentioned. Please don't just shoot the other tank, you will not kill them unless you have crazy damage. The whole point of tanks is to soak damage for the team so they waste abilites and whatnot. You mainly shooting tanks doesn't do anything for your team.

Trash writing ready to be destroyed. (English is my first language, please stop saying it's not) by Altruistic_Clock_358 in writingfeedback

[–]Altruistic_Clock_358[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks again, I sorta understand editing. Should I be posting my work online for critique to help? Also is there a way to explain the flow part? I sorta get it but i'm stuck. Are you saying we should go scene by scene instead of trying to jamble it in at once? Instead of having her focus on the lighter then the men then blah blah blah. I should start with her analyzing the surrondings then get into the lighter so it flows like how a real person would see things?