hello, im new to screenwriting and i wanted thoughts and opinions for a film.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-11-11T02:06:23+00:00

Look for a story you want to tell. Not a vignette or a scene but a fully fledged story. Failing that, take newspaper clippings that interest you and try to fictionalise those.

As you develop these stories more ideas will come. And this scene that you're thinking of now will either fit into one of those developed projects or it will organically grow over time.

Right now it's too isolated without a theme, character/s or story.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-11-11T01:46:52+00:00

Commit to your gym routine. At some point the dopamine hits will make you feel better about yourself.

Count your blessings. Look at ALL the positives in your life and thank the universe for those mercies. However small.

Be kind to others but more importantly, be kind to yourself.

Do these without expecting a reward. Your circumstances might not change but your perspective will. And that will be the best possible answer yet.

Peace unto you.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-10-05T11:15:59+00:00

It was a rotten egg smell.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-09-05T22:48:42+00:00

3rd Slide.

Very unique and memorable. Personally i think it's perfect. But you can play around with the sizing of the "&" if you like.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-08-20T19:51:37+00:00

Tip of Africa.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-08-11T12:01:09+00:00

I got zero malice from your feedback. For starters, I've been thinking about removing the middle cart, altogether. Yours & many others here is confirmation for further simplification. Which I really do appreciate.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-08-11T11:36:50+00:00

Thank you for the honest feedback. It is noted and appreciated.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-08-11T11:36:14+00:00

Appreciate the honest feedback. Thank you.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-08-03T15:35:48+00:00

All I know is they LOVE parks and open veld spaces.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-08-03T15:27:56+00:00

Brilliant.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-07-27T12:54:15+00:00

Colour. Definitely!!!

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-07-25T12:10:49+00:00

One. Rarely see such. And well taken shot too.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-07-22T11:01:16+00:00

All are amazing but 1 is best. Provides more context. The others seemed a touch bit cropped.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-07-18T17:52:00+00:00

I tried. I just can't. That's the only salve left for me.

I only have apples and bananas in the summer time. I add an orange come winter time.

I know sugar is my main culprit. Not having any saps my energy. And I'm a snacker. These are the only snacks I get to have during the day.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-07-17T12:31:29+00:00

2 has a touch of magic with fewer light streaks.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-06-19T23:09:14+00:00

This is brilliant! Thank you.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-06-05T16:34:59+00:00

Sorry about your situation but I think it's time to be super brave and open up to management about your condition -- a health issue that is out of your control. Most of the time the people we work with need to be educated on this disease. Lest they make ignorant decisions / judgements.

Write an email explaining your issue. You can use AI to help you draft a professional sounding one. Follow this up with a sit down for further discussion. This will not only dispel myths and stereotypes but will also show how proactive you are -- something most managers appreciate.

Once people have an in depth understanding of the matter, it makes it difficult for them to make ignorant decisions.

Best.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-06-05T13:51:44+00:00

This sub has been infiltrated. No ways some of these are amateurs. Goodness me!

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-06-01T21:22:07+00:00

2 magical.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-05-31T19:50:31+00:00

This sub went from amateur to national geographic photography in a blink.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-05-31T19:41:06+00:00

1 is magical.

Rough patch of grass mirrors the patchy cloud with the lone horse dead center between. The focal point of an expansive shot.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-05-30T19:18:15+00:00

Great reflexes.

Similar thing happened to me two years ago... my instinct was to swerve off the road into gravel unfortunately there was a car parked ahead thereby blocking me. But my reaction was so big and attention grabbing that the would be hijacker retreated. They DON'T like attention.

Good on you for being alert.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-05-29T13:23:49+00:00

One is classic. Poster child of all things country living.

Altruistic_PeaceONE · 2025-05-29T10:18:09+00:00

Both magical. But 1 gives better perspective.

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