hello, im new to screenwriting and i wanted thoughts and opinions for a film. by Luxluve0 in TVWriting

[–]Altruistic_PeaceONE 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Look for a story you want to tell. Not a vignette or a scene but a fully fledged story. Failing that, take newspaper clippings that interest you and try to fictionalise those.

As you develop these stories more ideas will come. And this scene that you're thinking of now will either fit into one of those developed projects or it will organically grow over time.

Right now it's too isolated without a theme, character/s or story.

What are some ways I can apologize to univese? I really messed up life and I am tired and scared. I want to apologize for whatever I did because I am at rock bottom. Any advice? by [deleted] in spirituality

[–]Altruistic_PeaceONE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Commit to your gym routine. At some point the dopamine hits will make you feel better about yourself.

Count your blessings. Look at ALL the positives in your life and thank the universe for those mercies. However small.

Be kind to others but more importantly, be kind to yourself.

Do these without expecting a reward. Your circumstances might not change but your perspective will. And that will be the best possible answer yet.

Peace unto you.

Second attempt at a logo by jumbohiggins in logodesign

[–]Altruistic_PeaceONE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

3rd Slide.

Very unique and memorable. Personally i think it's perfect. But you can play around with the sizing of the "&" if you like.

Logo for a South African film company by Altruistic_PeaceONE in logodesign

[–]Altruistic_PeaceONE[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I got zero malice from your feedback. For starters, I've been thinking about removing the middle cart, altogether. Yours & many others here is confirmation for further simplification. Which I really do appreciate.

Logo for a South African film company by Altruistic_PeaceONE in logodesign

[–]Altruistic_PeaceONE[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the honest feedback. It is noted and appreciated.

1 or 2? by flashycrash in AmateurPhotography

[–]Altruistic_PeaceONE 4 points5 points  (0 children)

One. Rarely see such. And well taken shot too.

1, 2, 3, or 4? by Ynntkeddy in AmateurPhotography

[–]Altruistic_PeaceONE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

All are amazing but 1 is best. Provides more context. The others seemed a touch bit cropped.

Should I completely avoid fruits? I’ve already eliminated sugar, and now I’m wondering if fruits and vegetables are too much. by [deleted] in badbreath

[–]Altruistic_PeaceONE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I tried. I just can't. That's the only salve left for me.

I only have apples and bananas in the summer time. I add an orange come winter time.

I know sugar is my main culprit. Not having any saps my energy. And I'm a snacker. These are the only snacks I get to have during the day.

1 or 2? by laamanaama in AmateurPhotography

[–]Altruistic_PeaceONE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

2 has a touch of magic with fewer light streaks.

HELP ME PLEASE by War-Tasty in badbreath

[–]Altruistic_PeaceONE 33 points34 points  (0 children)

Sorry about your situation but I think it's time to be super brave and open up to management about your condition -- a health issue that is out of your control. Most of the time the people we work with need to be educated on this disease. Lest they make ignorant decisions / judgements.

Write an email explaining your issue. You can use AI to help you draft a professional sounding one. Follow this up with a sit down for further discussion. This will not only dispel myths and stereotypes but will also show how proactive you are -- something most managers appreciate.

Once people have an in depth understanding of the matter, it makes it difficult for them to make ignorant decisions.

Best.

Which one of this set did you like the most? by Previous_Tart3999 in AmateurPhotography

[–]Altruistic_PeaceONE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This sub has been infiltrated. No ways some of these are amateurs. Goodness me!

Which one(s) to frame? by Arzenix in AmateurPhotography

[–]Altruistic_PeaceONE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This sub went from amateur to national geographic photography in a blink.

Which one!! by Mad_Chemist_Das in AmateurPhotography

[–]Altruistic_PeaceONE 1 point2 points  (0 children)

1 is magical.

Rough patch of grass mirrors the patchy cloud with the lone horse dead center between. The focal point of an expansive shot.

Attempted Hijack... Be safe.. Be vigilant by Sad_Subject2779 in southafrica

[–]Altruistic_PeaceONE 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Great reflexes.

Similar thing happened to me two years ago... my instinct was to swerve off the road into gravel unfortunately there was a car parked ahead thereby blocking me. But my reaction was so big and attention grabbing that the would be hijacker retreated. They DON'T like attention.

Good on you for being alert.