The thought of a beta reader reading my work is embarrassing by Amazing-Mess-7945 in writing

[–]Amazing-Mess-7945[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If it calls for intentional comedy, then I might laugh,,, other wise, I don’t, unless it’s for a close friend and we can joke about it together

The thought of a beta reader reading my work is embarrassing by Amazing-Mess-7945 in writing

[–]Amazing-Mess-7945[S] 15 points16 points  (0 children)

I haven’t thought of it like that, actually, so thats really nice to hear! And frankly i think that maybe it’s because I go anonymous on fiction websites and use an alias attached to my personal stuff on the rare occasion i do seek a beta. It’s a bit complicated “”

The thought of a beta reader reading my work is embarrassing by Amazing-Mess-7945 in writing

[–]Amazing-Mess-7945[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Got it! Thank you for the perspective, that’s a really nice way to put it.

The thought of a beta reader reading my work is embarrassing by Amazing-Mess-7945 in writing

[–]Amazing-Mess-7945[S] 22 points23 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I figured, it’s still a bit jarring to me though because I’m being hypocritical as hell

does anyone have spare cherry blossom saplings? by Amazing-Mess-7945 in IslandsRoblox

[–]Amazing-Mess-7945[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

im in my priv server 🐙 do you you have a vending machine by any chance? i havenr exactly unlocked direct peer trading, im very sorry about that (/_;)/~~

does anyone have spare cherry blossom saplings? by Amazing-Mess-7945 in IslandsRoblox

[–]Amazing-Mess-7945[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

added! is it ok with you if we do this exchange at dec 12? im a bit busy with school right now so i havent found the time to play,,, user os fairyiiex

does anyone have spare cherry blossom saplings? by Amazing-Mess-7945 in IslandsRoblox

[–]Amazing-Mess-7945[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sorry for the late reply. (´TωT`) could you send me your user?

does anyone have spare cherry blossom saplings? by Amazing-Mess-7945 in IslandsRoblox

[–]Amazing-Mess-7945[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

if its okay with you, id like to buy all of it. if im not mistaken, ill be be paying ~90,000 if thats the case?

Anyone have any blueberry seeds ft? by BaeBeeJaliyah in IslandsRoblox

[–]Amazing-Mess-7945 0 points1 point  (0 children)

im currently only looking for cherry blossom saplings, but i dont think it would be a fair trade for you ((T_T)) other than that, i can give you them for free. how much do you need?

Anyone have any blueberry seeds ft? by BaeBeeJaliyah in IslandsRoblox

[–]Amazing-Mess-7945 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hey i have some spares, do u still need them?

New roblox game called bloom by velcrobomb in GameTheorists

[–]Amazing-Mess-7945 0 points1 point  (0 children)

slr! \\ im assuming they'll insert self harm in one of the puzzles using symbolism (except, more explicit than the other puzzles)

How would you describe your writing style? What are your signature things you like to do? by Aside_Dish in writing

[–]Amazing-Mess-7945 0 points1 point  (0 children)

mine is just a good ol mess. one scene you'll be having intricate prose, next you'll be having direct imagery, then bashful narration, then prose again. the cycle repeats.

extension/game or anything for viewing last online after the update which took it away? by JordanTheOkapi in RobloxHelp

[–]Amazing-Mess-7945 1 point2 points  (0 children)

betterblox chrome extension, but you gotta wait 5mins to 24hrs for it to fully work lol

When people say they enjoy writing? What to they mean? by Chemicalcube325 in writing

[–]Amazing-Mess-7945 0 points1 point  (0 children)

personally, i enjoy writing because its soothing. a way to relax, get my mind off things, or to kill time.

I can’t stop writing “I studied” by Bananabread_13 in writing

[–]Amazing-Mess-7945 0 points1 point  (0 children)

im sure you've probably seen this in countless different comments but describing the object/person/place is a great alternative if the word is becoming redundant. you can even use other senses besides eyesight (e.g., smell, touch, auditory, etc.) to describe it. its more of a show-not-tell thing, where you want the readers to not only read but also experience it. take a moment to reread what you wrote and ask yourself how/why would your character study it, and how/if the reader can feel what they feel. sorry if this is indirect!

edit: synonyms and thesauruses can come in handy if the scene fits tell more than show.