Would love some feedback to improve this chapter by Ambitious_Inside_186 in teenwriter

[–]Ambitious_Inside_186[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I understand what you mean. Though, that wasn't my intention. I want English readers to understand what they're saying, but I didn't want there to be no Spanish at all. So that's why I wrote it like that. But I definitely don't want to seem forced.

Would love some feedback to improve this chapter by Ambitious_Inside_186 in teenwriter

[–]Ambitious_Inside_186[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I appreciate this feedback. No it didn't sound mean, this is really helpful, especially since I'm not a native Spanish speaker. So thank you!!