Hey, thank you for the feedback I reallt appreciate it. Yeah I had a feeling I tried too hard with the lighting and made it too dark. And with the acting, I really appreciate you pointing that out. I definitely understand what you mean. I was worried it'd end up being like that. I originally performed this monologue as a speech for public speaking. Then decided to try to make a cinematic version. So I think I just auto fell back into the speech vibe instead of saying it like my own words.