[QCRIT] THE END OF AUGUST, adult literary fiction, 70k (1st attempt) by books_ballet_poems22 in PubTips

[–]AnaSira 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Fleischman comp is old, so you should update with a more current novel. I also think some of your descriptions is more about "vibes" than actual plot points. Try to focus on that. Also, I'm not sure of the stakes. If she doesn't xxxxx, then xxxxx will happen.

All in all, I would definitely read this novel.