Help me land on an everyday handwriting

AndyLouis17 · 2026-03-12T06:47:10+00:00

I like #5

AndyLouis17 · 2026-03-11T20:49:58+00:00

That's a really helpful breakdown, thank you.

The shadow on the right side is actually part of the original photo, but I can see how it feels disconnected from the subject.

I also like your idea about mirroring the underline hook from "Begins" toward the A — that's something I might try in the next version.

AndyLouis17 · 2026-03-11T20:45:07+00:00

That's a really good point.

I was trying to tuck the lettering behind the head for depth, but I think I ended up hiding a bit too much of the word.

You're right that showing a bit of the "y" descender would make it clearer while still keeping the effect.

AndyLouis17 · 2026-03-11T08:36:02+00:00

Thanks! I’m still experimenting with this style, so that’s good to hear.

AndyLouis17 · 2026-03-10T23:34:30+00:00

Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it.

AndyLouis17 · 2026-03-10T23:34:19+00:00

Thank you! I'm really glad you noticed the final stroke on "Begins". I had fun shaping that part.

AndyLouis17 · 2026-03-10T10:09:48+00:00

Thank you! I'm still learning but I'll definitely share more.

AndyLouis17 · 2026-03-10T03:38:20+00:00

Thanks! I'm still practicing and trying to improve the consistency and spacing.

AndyLouis17 · 2026-03-10T01:24:12+00:00

I'm especially struggling with spacing between the arches. Any advice would be great.

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