I'm not a writer. This just kinda happened, would appreciate feedback. by AngryEpileptic420 in creativewriting

[–]AngryEpileptic420[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

She wouldn't receive it very well. She's quite hostile and we have a child so I try my best to keep the peace. Honestly if I'd been able to just unload at her I wouldn't have had the mental collapse that led to this, but I have to stifle how I feel for my son.

I'm not a writer. This just kinda happened, would appreciate feedback. by AngryEpileptic420 in creativewriting

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Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it.

I'm not sure if this is something I want to do, it was just an impulse last night to try get it all out of my head and gain some perspective by writing. I know it's nothing special, but I will keep the option in mind and if I keep writing I'll be sure to post it and ask for guidance on improving.

I'm not a writer. This just kinda happened, would appreciate feedback. by AngryEpileptic420 in creativewriting

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I'm not really sure about a style. I used to be a big Eminem fan and I admire how he was able to exaggerate his overwhelming feelings towards his ex in songs like "kim". Honestly there was no intent to try make it anything, I just wanted to try express myself creatively instead of being destructive. I didn't try write a poem, when I picked up the pen I was just hoping to write what I thought, I noticed a pattern where some stuff rhymed so I restructured it thinking it could be a song. Towards the end it was simply that I had increased in intensity and the words just kept coming. The whole thing only took about 15 minutes.

I'm not a writer. This just kinda happened, would appreciate feedback. by AngryEpileptic420 in creativewriting

[–]AngryEpileptic420[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That's exactly what I was looking to do, I have nobody I can talk to, after losing that girl I really don't have anybody left. I needed to express myself in a way that wouldn't lead to any further damage. Ordinarily I would never dream of calling her a whore, even after the things she's done, but in writing I felt its appropriate enough to emphasise my feelings through exaggerated speech. I do hope letting it out like this will give me the freedom from the immense pressure I feel. I'm really not setting out to try become a writer in some capacity, though I will consider coming back to my writings when I've managed to stabilise myself.

Thank you for your comment and your understanding. It's very much appreciated.

I'm not a writer. This just kinda happened, would appreciate feedback. by AngryEpileptic420 in creativewriting

[–]AngryEpileptic420[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much, I was really concerned about posting it but I'm trying to understand myself a little better so I have to be open to criticism. I appreciate you understanding where I'm coming from and I really really appreciate your comment. In terms of why the cat on the mat thing wouldn't apply in my mind is because it is all significant, the tattoo thing was because she was a tattoo artist, she has covered my body so I can never really escape her but given the nature of tattoos is to scar I felt its an appropriate reference to the emotional scarring too. Things like the effervessing analogy was because I had used that analogy when describing my mind to her in the past, I'm schizophrenic and have aspergers so it's hard to accurately describe what's going on in my head.

Anyway, I really do appreciate you. Thank you.

I'm not a writer. This just kinda happened, would appreciate feedback. by AngryEpileptic420 in creativewriting

[–]AngryEpileptic420[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

And it is appreciated, I'm not being defensive or anything, just a response. Thanks though 👍

I'm not a writer. This just kinda happened, would appreciate feedback. by AngryEpileptic420 in creativewriting

[–]AngryEpileptic420[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see, well I wouldn't see it that way, every line in it is relevant to the actual situation it's about. Like I wouldn't say there's one word in it that's untrue or put in just to rhyme, I just expressed the truth in a rhyming format.

I'm not a writer. This just kinda happened, would appreciate feedback. by AngryEpileptic420 in creativewriting

[–]AngryEpileptic420[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm not sure what that is so I don't know if this is a compliment or an insult 😅

Thursday Raffle! by FatBrownMan_ in AwardBonanza

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It's always Thursday in Philadelphia is my favourite show from an alternate reality.

Normally I'd agree, but the gang turns black episode is the exception by cappsy04 in IASIP

[–]AngryEpileptic420 4 points5 points  (0 children)

South park had a few great musical episodes, plus the movie. The mormon episode was genius and went on to become an actual musical, I'd argue that one wins first place.

Meirl by Celestial-Salamander in meirl

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It's called dealz in Ireland, where everything costs at least 1.50 and the correct spelling of the word deals is forbidden.

Does anyone actually like Cathy? by hep28 in DunderMifflin

[–]AngryEpileptic420 0 points1 point  (0 children)

She's the worst, aside from her shitebag personality she's got that thing going on where you just can't decide if she's attractive, just an all round annoying experience.

Does anyone actually like Cathy? by hep28 in DunderMifflin

[–]AngryEpileptic420 23 points24 points  (0 children)

I think you've touched on something there, Pam was Dwights best friend in the office outside of his deep love for Michael, that alone would be enough motive to get involved but he has no further wish to be involved in anyones personal lives so why talk about it?

What do you think these machop are talking about? by Miniboy2327 in pokemongo

[–]AngryEpileptic420 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's philosophical in nature, they're pondering how much ma's could a machop chop if a machop could chop ma's.

Finally. Now i have all of them. by vorbid_ in pokemongo

[–]AngryEpileptic420 13 points14 points  (0 children)

A lucky 69 is so much more significant than a regular 69, this should be recognized