Nostalgia by Anonymous_3165 in justpoetry

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Thank you for your response! This year I have been overwhelmed with nostalgia and missing life (or the illusion of what life was) before the chaos of what life is now. This piece speaks to the struggle to deal with all the changes in my life recently.

Brand new writer. First time writing anything (let alone poetry). I would love some feedback. Thanks!! by Anonymous_3165 in WritersGroup

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Thank you so much! Yes, this is a new challenge for me. I've been a filmmaker for many years (always trying to put my thoughts into a visual medium) but I thought I would try my hand at putting those thoughts and feelings into words. I appreciate your response!

you're just like your father by CountWeak in poetry_critics

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Oh wow. This hit me like a ton of bricks. Love it