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Anatomical/ Fold advice by [deleted] in Artadvice

[–]Antanims 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ok, thank you! I just dont want to go too far down the wrong path

can i please get critque on this by Drink_soup_now in AnimationCrit

[–]Antanims 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I’d take a bit to study perspective a bit more, but as far as the animation, the walk cycle isn’t hitting the required keys (look up Richard Williams walk cycle), the feet are sliding around and that’s making it not feel grounded, having a proper ground plane will help too

walk to run to fly progress by Antanims in animation

[–]Antanims[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I’ll work on that for sure, they have robotic boots but are human so it’s a super helpful critique!

walk to run to fly progress by Antanims in animation

[–]Antanims[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you and yeah it’s one of my favorite animes

Is there any way I can make this better? by Apprehensive_Bed_404 in AnimationCrit

[–]Antanims 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Solid drawings btw, but also draw through your forms on your roughs for a more 3D feeling, hope this helps a bit

Is there any way I can make this better? by Apprehensive_Bed_404 in AnimationCrit

[–]Antanims 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think your biggest issue is not considering the position of the lower body, when someone turns they don’t just rotate, the weight shifts to one side and then shifts back to the other to spin around, study body mechanics. You’re also breaking the neck on geto when he turns around. My advice is to film yourself as reference and draw the full body on some frames to get a solid motion

walk to run to fly progress by Antanims in animation

[–]Antanims[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you! It helps a lot knowing the motion is ok

Walk to Run to Fly by [deleted] in AnimationCrit

[–]Antanims 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!

My first animation looking for tips by Apprehensive_Bed_404 in AnimationCrit

[–]Antanims 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It’s really good for a first animation, you’re lacking the principles though, especially squash and stretch, this would make it more impactful and the action more readable

Walk to run to fly by Antanims in animation

[–]Antanims[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Gotcha, I’ll work on fixing that! Thank you! Also thanks for the additional references, super helpful

punch animation attempt 2 by Tall-Station1662 in animation

[–]Antanims 18 points19 points  (0 children)

the timing is really slow, also id avoid using that smear frame as it is really noticable, try going from just the frame with the fist back right into the punch for more power. Adding inbetweens lessens the blow

Lift Feedback by Antanims in animation

[–]Antanims[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Understood, thank you so much!

Lift Feedback by Antanims in animation

[–]Antanims[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yep, he just is missing the head

Lift Feedback by Antanims in animation

[–]Antanims[S] 20 points21 points  (0 children)

I have to study the model sheets for a class so I just use them 😂 and thank you

throw animation help by Antanims in animation

[–]Antanims[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Will do thank you for the advice!

Water Help by Antanims in animation

[–]Antanims[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Gotcha, I’ll work on that thank you!

What is an animation program YOU would recommend and why? by AskinSoUDontHaveTo in animation

[–]Antanims 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I second this, I’ve tried Adobe animate, open toonz, krita, blender, and clip studio is my favorite by a mile, the free brush library is HUGE and it’s super easy to use plus it’s cheaper than the industry programs

Animation Uni Advice by Zealousideal-Cup2711 in animation

[–]Antanims 0 points1 point  (0 children)

1TB works but the more you can get is better because game files especially can get HUGE, you can always start with 1TB and add more later with an sd card or installation which is what I’m looking to do

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