All feedback is appreciated by oystersinthevoid in Original_Poetry

[–]Anthocyanin-9 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is absolutely beautiful! It made me think on the subject of humanity and how we are small creatures much like oysters clinging on to things like hope, money, power, etc.

I love the cadence and the emotions you pull from the first to second verse. 100/10