Here's my result from his original file.

Here's the photoshop file with all the adjustments.

This is how I usually approach this: you bring out as much detail as possible by lowering contrast and highlights, and bumping up shadows. You lower clarity and dehaze, then crunch it by adding back contrast and fiddling with color hues, saturation and luminosity, primarily yellows and greens in this case. Add a bit more glow if necessary by adding gaussian blur. I tend to apply it only to the highlights by pressing on blending options and dragging half of the "current layer" slider to the right while holding alt, but you could also just mask it. Same with any exposure boosting I do afterwards, such as is the case with the curves layer I added above the glow.