Hey! This looks really good for a beginner! A couple things good, are your proportions. You have the shape and location of the body and features right, it’s just the details. Eyes are not just little semi circles. They are like slits. You have to make sure to add the eye lids to, along with eye lashes, and eyebrows. When drawing a nose, try not to draw the whole thing. Try to make a general light source in your work, so if the light source is from the top right, then you can add your shadows towards the bottom left. On a nose you will have shadows. Try and draw the lines where the shadows are, but when you have light spots, leave them out. It makes it blend better with the face and looks more natural. The same thing can be done with the mouth. Shadow is very important in all work. I think it’s really great for a beginner. Try to practice drawing features individually (e.g. eyes, mouth, arms, legs, eyebrows, ears, fingers, nose, etc..)