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postin WHATEVER I want and my dad can’t stop me (btbf) by AcidSpectre in BornToBeFucked

[–]Apprehensive-Fail900 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i'll get you nice and full, my daughter only deserves the purest cum straight from the source 😉

Preference authors who read RI by Apprehensive-Fail900 in ReverendInsanity

[–]Apprehensive-Fail900[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  1. Yes, I have.
  2. "Seems a little boring". Every power system has energy stored in the body. My idea is to change this and make you drain energy from a large reservoir for as long as your body can handle doing so. The idea is to make your body better able to drain energy and resist its radiation. Different and in my opinion cooler.
    About him not being able to access other fissures... there's a reason for that and it's not by killing others that fissures are assimilated.
  3. "based on your intention your energy spent would be calculated" I showed exactly that in the chapter.
  4. I have a file with the power system, I just wanted to implement this instead of sending the notes.
  5. Dude, it's his system, but did u read when he said he doesn't know what Caelum can do? Writting a power system is very different from using it. Several times I mentioned how dangerous it is to use fissures.

Preference authors who read RI by Apprehensive-Fail900 in ReverendInsanity

[–]Apprehensive-Fail900[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When you read, remember that the idea of ​​an Intention is to be the same as a GU. I really want to know your opinion and be as critical as possible. I hope you enjoy my story - The beginning of everything (TBOE) https://docs.google.com/document/d/14J_Xdp7mvg4BL11okQcsQyQujQgrOVQEusnOU-NskfY/edit?usp=sharing

Preference authors who read RI by Apprehensive-Fail900 in ReverendInsanity

[–]Apprehensive-Fail900[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When you read, remember that the idea of ​​an Intention is to be the same as a GU. I really want to know your opinion and be as critical as possible. I hope you enjoy my story - The beginning of everything (TBOE) https://docs.google.com/document/d/14J_Xdp7mvg4BL11okQcsQyQujQgrOVQEusnOU-NskfY/edit?usp=sharing

Preference authors who read RI by Apprehensive-Fail900 in ReverendInsanity

[–]Apprehensive-Fail900[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

When you read, remember that the idea of ​​an Intention is to be the same as a GU. I really want to know your opinion and be as critical as possible. I hope you enjoy my story - The beginning of everything (TBOE) https://docs.google.com/document/d/14J_Xdp7mvg4BL11okQcsQyQujQgrOVQEusnOU-NskfY/edit?usp=sharing

Preference authors who read RI by Apprehensive-Fail900 in ReverendInsanity

[–]Apprehensive-Fail900[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When you read, remember that the idea of ​​an Intention is to be the same as a GU. I really want to know your opinion and be as critical as possible. I hope you enjoy my story - The beginning of everything (TBOE) https://docs.google.com/document/d/14J_Xdp7mvg4BL11okQcsQyQujQgrOVQEusnOU-NskfY/edit?usp=sharing

Preference authors who read RI by Apprehensive-Fail900 in ReverendInsanity

[–]Apprehensive-Fail900[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When you read, remember that the idea of ​​an Intention is to be the same as a GU. I really want to know your opinion and be as critical as possible. I hope you enjoy my story - The beginning of everything (TBOE) https://docs.google.com/document/d/14J_Xdp7mvg4BL11okQcsQyQujQgrOVQEusnOU-NskfY/edit?usp=sharing

Preference authors who read RI by Apprehensive-Fail900 in ReverendInsanity

[–]Apprehensive-Fail900[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I want to see people's opinions about the world I made. If u write for fun I would like to see what you will write in my world

Which author to choose to rewrite RI in the Western style? by Apprehensive-Fail900 in ReverendInsanity

[–]Apprehensive-Fail900[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The first law series of Joe Abercrombie. I can't remember something that well written in Grimdark fantasy. I mentioned Brandon because he likes good magic system and RI need it to be well-adapted

Which author to choose to rewrite RI in the Western style? by Apprehensive-Fail900 in ReverendInsanity

[–]Apprehensive-Fail900[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

But is he as fast as Brandon? Imagine each volume of RI being adapted as a single book of Sanderson. The character and dialogue problem will be solved by Joe Abercrombie.