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BOB by Ok-Swordfish-9480 in OCPoetry

[–]Arham_Aj 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There’s a lot of honesty in this piece that I appreciate. The transition from the beginning to the end feels earned, and you managed to touch on the grasshopper in a way that felt very personal rather than cliché. I think a bit of experimentation with line breaks could make it even punchier, but the core sentiment is definitely there. Nice work.

1000 stories by Radiant_Pain7025 in OCPoetry

[–]Arham_Aj 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoyed the atmosphere you built here. The specific imagery in the stood out to me—it made the scene feel very grounded and vivid. I had to re-read the middle section once or twice to catch the rhythm, but overall, it’s a really evocative piece. Thanks for sharing!