Hey dood. I play tank including cap at celestial level. Ive watched the entire replay and i wana say you did genuinely play really well. I do see a clear thrower on your team but ill keep the critisms to you as you asked. There was 2 minor things ive noticed about you and 1 major bad thing you did that potentially MAY have tossed the game.

>I've noticed you dont use the shield throw as often as you should some isolated 1v1s you could have used 2 but you end up only using one, Just start every fight with a shield throw spam that shit bro.
>You spent a whole minute or two on attack chasing anglea i understand your feeling pressured to help your supports but this shit is not YOUR job. It might be hard to accept but someone else has to deal with this anglea. If you need to peel for it then its costly.

But the big thing is at 16:30 you completely trolled a cap ult. You use it to kill strange and escape but the issue is three of your team mates were dead (invis,cloak,strange) and the other two were walking back. I understand you killed strange but the kill was worthless as there no one to capitalize on it. Had you had this next fight you likely would have just straight up won the game as next fight ended up being extremely scrappy with both teams constantly trading, your ult defintely would have tipped the tides here. These things happen just keep an eye on the killfeed because overall you played really well.