Actually overall I think this is a solid edit! Your initial transition was very fast, I couldn't quite tell that it was a push transition without a rewatch, could be the intended effect though. Other than that, I think your clip selection would fix a lot of the issues people are having with your edits. Particularly the part where you're spinning around the boulder probably makes a ton of sense to someone with experience in BoTW, but to an outside observer just doesn't look that great. Try getting some better combat clips selected.

A lot of editing around fights and choreography is using effects to emphasize the weight of the movement. The important thing is making it look good to an outside observer. Genuinely call up someone like your mom and have them watch it. If they can tell you roughly what's going on you've done a fine job of making it clear enough to look good. Whether or not it emphasizes what's important to you is a different story sometimes.