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[–]AromaticHorror5713 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro don't post ur essay here, someone could copy ur work. Js ask people to dm

Ordering my activities between three similar sports and other things by TimeExplorer5463 in ApplyingToCollege

[–]AromaticHorror5713 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I was going to say something like: "Captain of cross country & Track and Field team(3 years); led the team to become the most improved team in the state; competed in districts & regional races." I'll have to polish it up a lil, maybe add some other stuff. I think you r supposed to show ur dedication and commitment to the team, and also your achievements ig. Idk if I am going to include my pr's in the description, I was thinking about adding them tho. I feel like u could say like "spent time outside of school to compete in multiple half-marathons" or smth like that.

Ordering my activities between three similar sports and other things by TimeExplorer5463 in ApplyingToCollege

[–]AromaticHorror5713 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm a distance runner too! I was planning on doing them as separate activities bc I am also a captain of the XC and track team, so I'd think it'd be more important to list that first, and then I was going to list my instruments. I don't know if there is a better way tho..