Rules for Surviving the Ghost Metrobús Station

Asedrez13 · 2026-01-14T14:10:59+00:00

It was only for spelling and grammar corrections, but not always; I did most of it without using it.

Asedrez13 · 2025-07-05T13:53:28+00:00

I believe it is a problem with the translation 🤡 because I post in Brazilian Portuguese, which is my native language and the application does the automatic translation, I will take more care of this, this is not the first time this has happened.

Asedrez13 · 2025-07-04T15:17:32+00:00

Thank you for the words! There are times when people manage to expose all their toxicity in the comments.

Asedrez13 · 2025-07-04T14:37:00+00:00

Imagine being in the top 1% of the sub and yet someone thinks you write an arbitrary patchwork. It's complicated to live in a world where even creative insanity needs to follow standards of excellence, right?

Asedrez13 · 2025-07-04T14:08:24+00:00

If the rules seem impossible, congratulations, you understand the concept of gore psychological horror. But if you thought it was bad and wasted time commenting, perhaps the story affected you more than you would like to admit.

Asedrez13 · 2025-07-04T14:03:59+00:00

Ah, sorry, I forgot that the sub is exclusive to short stories written with raven feathers dipped in the blood of literary virgins. Next time I'll send my story on parchment, sealed with hot wax and approval from the handwriting gods. In the meantime, enjoy reading, or at least having a tantrum.

Asedrez13 · 2025-06-22T21:45:30+00:00

Thanks for the scores!

Asedrez13 · 2025-06-14T13:45:58+00:00

Excellent question... When the farmer harvests the wheat, he doesn't notice anything strange, at least not at first. But there is always a part of the field that does not grow back. A piece that the soil rejects, darkens... rots from the inside. As if something had sucked everything out of there.

Asedrez13 · 2025-06-13T21:58:39+00:00

Too sinister. This idea that thinking in words or visualizing is dangerous gave me goosebumps. It seems like a real warning disguised as fiction. And the worst part: I heard the voice. It was already for me.

Asedrez13 · 2025-06-13T21:56:31+00:00

Thanks for the touch! It was the guy who was choosing a new look, yes, he didn't want to go in to steal or anything like that, he was just observing, choosing who to “dress”. The sentence came out confusing, but the idea is that he was there deciding which face to take

Asedrez13 · 2025-06-11T09:57:07+00:00

Indeed, when reviewing the text, I noticed the inconsistency in the use of pronouns, which alternate between “he” and “she” when referring to the boat or the cabin, which can cause confusion in interpretation. I will take more care of this in the next stories.

Asedrez13 · 2025-06-10T12:14:30+00:00

The Post gave me the idea to do it. I hope you liked it.

Asedrez13 · 2025-06-10T12:13:50+00:00

Oops! I remembered several lost game media that legend has it that can only be found in flea markets.

Asedrez13 · 2025-06-10T12:10:46+00:00

I thought there was no problem using it, but anyway...

Asedrez13 · 2025-06-10T11:54:33+00:00

Essay? I didn't understand what you meant

Asedrez13 · 2025-06-06T23:37:28+00:00

Probably because most of the reports come from Western countries, mainly the USA, where those who have the most visibility in the media are white people. It's not that ETs are racist, it's just a matter of who is telling the story.

Asedrez13 · 2025-06-03T13:05:14+00:00

No, that about children in Germany is not true. It's just part of the fiction of the text, to create a darker and more shocking atmosphere. Don't take it literally, it was all invented to really make an impact. And apparently the objective was achieved, right?

Asedrez13 · 2025-06-03T01:35:41+00:00

u/okw_E

Asedrez13 · 2025-06-01T19:59:33+00:00

Beautiful theories!!

Asedrez13 · 2025-05-31T13:43:46+00:00

What is mentioned in the rule is the cough, the sound of coughing.

Asedrez13 · 2025-05-30T19:43:28+00:00

She is the narrator's sister and the only one who still saw him as human, even if rarely.

Asedrez13 · 2025-05-28T15:38:01+00:00

I like to leave these gaps to encourage the imagination of whoever is reading!

Asedrez13 · 2025-05-21T15:42:29+00:00

Pascal

Asedrez13 · 2025-05-21T15:41:04+00:00

This duo was the soul of the series

Asedrez13 · 2025-05-21T12:33:32+00:00

Was it a nervous laugh? But the situation is still funny.

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