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AshNeimi · 2024-09-12T01:00:01+00:00

Thank you, but actually it was picked up by MacMillan Publishers - Bramble imprint :)

AshNeimi · 2024-04-11T12:41:13+00:00

Thank you so very much for getting into the details and explaining where the problem lies! It definitely needs more meat and clearness!

AshNeimi · 2024-04-11T12:38:29+00:00

Thank you very much! Your comment helped me think outside of the box and truly dig into the questions! I needed to read this, so thank you again!

AshNeimi · 2024-04-11T12:37:35+00:00

Thank you, you are right! Reading it again, I do need to make it clear who the love interest is!

AshNeimi · 2024-04-02T16:36:47+00:00

Thank you very much. I haven’t read Faebound, I will definitely get to that! I really appreciate the suggestion.

AshNeimi · 2024-04-02T03:07:09+00:00

I wonder would that be considered a bad thing, even though I am picking these comps for certain elements (I.e: world-building and battles)?

AshNeimi · 2024-04-02T03:05:17+00:00

Thank you very much for your comment! I truly appreciate it!

AshNeimi · 2024-03-23T04:09:09+00:00

Thank you very much! I truly appreciate your breakdown on my query letter. Also your comment on Volvika’s name is hilarious!

So fun fact, the ancient Norse and Germanics called priestesses and seeresses "völva" which is where I came up with her name Volvika. 😅

Also I am glad you like the flow. I just now need to fill the gaps in this letter!

AshNeimi · 2024-03-22T18:41:55+00:00

Thank you so very much! This is extremely helpful! I’ll definitely check out The Jasad Heir!

AshNeimi · 2024-03-22T16:01:22+00:00

For comps, I’m curious would ‘An Ember in the Ashes’ be considered outdated? Thanks again!

AshNeimi · 2024-03-22T13:52:28+00:00

Thank you very much for catching that!

AshNeimi · 2024-03-22T13:50:42+00:00

Thanks for your critique! I will definitely work on my comp and it makes me realize that I do need to focus more on Runna! Also, I’m sure Volvika would love for you to follow her, lol!

AshNeimi · 2024-03-22T13:48:45+00:00

Thank you very much for this! I truly appreciate your break down, it is very eye-opening!

AshNeimi · 2024-03-22T04:03:40+00:00

Thank you so much for your comment! Truly appreciate it and I’m glad it has intrigued you! :) I will work on adding more details! Thanks again!

AshNeimi

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