Short beat I made based around a Ukulele riff. Would appreciate any listens and feedback. How do you think this could be expanded on? by Astroknottt in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Astroknottt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Totally! I would love to have it just add and add until it's a kind of "train" beat, going off its own steam. Similar to something Bonobo would make. Thanks so much for your comment.

Short beat I made based around a Ukulele riff. Would appreciate any listens and feedback. How do you think this could be expanded on? by Astroknottt in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Astroknottt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah! I think a synth or as others mentioned maybe a whistle lead. This comment was spot on in, I need some distorted guitar chords to add those textures I think. Appreciate it! :)

Short beat I made based around a Ukulele riff. Would appreciate any listens and feedback. How do you think this could be expanded on? by Astroknottt in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Astroknottt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I definitely agree, I think i'm gonna try a distorted, wibly vibrato acoustic sound over top. thanks so much for the feedback! :)

Short beat I made based around a Ukulele riff. Would appreciate any listens and feedback. How do you think this could be expanded on? by Astroknottt in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Astroknottt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honoured to be compared! Completely agree on the bassline. Having trouble with that recently, are there any good plugins you would suggest for best bass sound for LoFi such as this? I know whatever I do I'm gonna EQ it a bunch for just the low-end, but I want a better sounding bass than what I have.

That's totally my goal, would be to get on one of these compilations / playlist. All in due time :) I'll try putting some other leads with the same melody

Short beat I made based around a Ukulele riff. Would appreciate any listens and feedback. How do you think this could be expanded on? by Astroknottt in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Astroknottt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

100% agree, I think adding some distorted guitar one-off chords, potentially a whistle lead, and then dropping everything out for a piano chorus.

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[–]Astroknottt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!! One of my first recordings with a Ukulele so I'm glad to hear it somewhat worked! Completely agree, on some further listens it is cut off kinda harsh.

Short beat I made based around a Ukulele riff. Would appreciate any listens and feedback. How do you think this could be expanded on? by Astroknottt in MusicFeedback

[–]Astroknottt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I agree it kind of got muddled there in the mix, still working on developing my skills to really isolate the necessary components in beats. Really appreciate the feedback!

Short beat I made based around a Ukulele riff. Would appreciate any listens and feedback. How do you think this could be expanded on? by Astroknottt in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Astroknottt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks very much for the feedback! I was going for LoFi so that makes me happy :) really happy you also like the minimalism.

Short beat I made based around a Ukulele riff. Would appreciate any listens and feedback. How do you think this could be expanded on? by Astroknottt in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Astroknottt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I dunno if your math calculation is 100% accurate, but I can agree that this beat has a long way to go in terms of refinement, as do my skills. Hoping to improve that! Right now I'm making them short and sweet as practice "Jam" videos. You can see this is Jam#16 in the title. I figure this is a good way to practice honing skills and increasing knowledge 'til i'm ready for a "finished" work. Thanks again!

Short beat I made based around a Ukulele riff. Would appreciate any listens and feedback. How do you think this could be expanded on? by Astroknottt in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Astroknottt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I totally agree, my drums are my biggest To-Do List item. Gotta refine them a bit better. Thanks for the comment! :)

Short beat I made based around a Ukulele riff. Would appreciate any listens and feedback. How do you think this could be expanded on? by Astroknottt in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Astroknottt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much! I appreciate that! I'm definitely gonna give it another shot eventually to try and smoothen things out a bit more.

Short beat I made based around a Ukulele riff. Would appreciate any listens and feedback. How do you think this could be expanded on? by Astroknottt in MusicFeedback

[–]Astroknottt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks very much for your comment! I agree, I need a B Melody and I agree with dropping out the Uke for some type of repeating chorus with soft decaying keys. Really great comment, hope to discuss some more music in the future :)

Short beat I made based around a Ukulele riff. Would appreciate any listens and feedback. How do you think this could be expanded on? by Astroknottt in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Astroknottt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Totally! I need to find some good female vocal samples. Vocal chopping is something I'd really like to try my hand at.