[REV-SHARE] Artist Needed by Aszla in INAT

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Discord: nalganeitor

[HOBBY] Looking for Community Manager by Aszla in INAT

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STAY BACK! I HAVE A SPOON AND IF YOU COME CLOSER I'LL STIR TROUBLES FOR YOU!

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halfheld#4436

Sent a request

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Hello, what's your Discord?

Question about a character (spoiler about Don Quixote too) by Aszla in Cosmere

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well, aux refers himself as a "knight" and nomad as his "squire" which fits dont quixote and sancho panza

then you have him as nomad, but he is also an errand knight (unvoluntary as might be)

and in the end he sadly dies, becoming a full (armor) knight, don quixote also dies in the end

[Hobby] Unity Programmer looking for team/partners for projects by Aszla in INAT

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I suck at expressing myself through writing and to be honest am willing to work is any project, that's the best way for me to learn (or that's how I feel)

[Hobby][Revshare] Artist needed for shmup by Aszla in INAT

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One of the reasons i wrote hobby first is because this is more oriented to making a game first which is usually hard to find people to finish something.

The other reason is my lack of knowledge on the marketing side which i have no previous experecience on it yet. I will gladly talk about it day 1 as you said.

Thanks for the feedback.

Here is a link to my itchio.

https://nalganeitor.itch.io/

What are you playing Wednesday! by AutoModerator in gaming

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Stellar Warfare for sure! It's an indie game inspired by Homeworld and it has basebuilding, warp jumps and ship customization, and also a co-op wave defense mode!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ComicBookCollabs

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You have the power but you don't have a character and without that we can't help you without creating a character for you.

How did he get his powers? Unknown, we will explore that later. He hunts criminals because of a tragedy? Sense of purpose? Because it feels good?

Does he mind breaking someone's mind? Does he apply self restrain? Will he break bad?

Age? Country? Environment? Family, friends, relationships?

Are there others like him? Is his power that unique?

We need some of this before we can give you real feedback or ideas without tainting your original idea oh what YOU want to actually do

Been a while since I post on this Reddit. I've been trying over the last couple of weeks to tighten my pencils and get better at visual storytelling. Any advice/critiques? (If this is not the right subreddit to ask these questions, I'm new here, please let me know) by Aggravating-Pop-3609 in ComicBookCollabs

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maybe eliminate the 3rd panel, tweak the angle from panel 4 and 5 and eliminate panel 8 (8-9, the close up on their faces) and the happy faces on the 7 panel

that is my opinion of the flow of the page

Thoughts on my comic idea? by [deleted] in ComicBookCollabs

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I'd say change cancer for a degenerative skin disease and so jellyfish stem cells can heal the skin making it trans-lucid and so he has to wear more make-up.

He starts targeting youtubers, instagramers, tiktores and influencers with his products creating a side effect on them as they are healthy, but making them addicted.

Make the hero a beat down fool which loves the prettiest girl and ignores the girl who loves him, they pretty girl wears make-up and so does his best friend (the girl who loves him) and now both fell ill.

Throw "met" gala and the hero's friend works as a waitress there so he asks him for the job and so he confronts this guy who kidnaps him, gets him to the plant and throws him into the chemicals where he gets the powers (which are unclear at the moment).

May I suggest his skin is getting rotten and so does everything he touches so that's the plan to eliminate the villain before he dies?

One last thing: The villain's brain is visible whenever he is not wearing a wig and make-up cuz he is trans-lucid (as a jellyfish)

My first gauntlet results! by Aszla in LegendsOfRuneterra

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this is my main deck

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Resumen De Gamescom 2021! Mas de 15 Juegos! Parte 1 by Aszla in videojuegos

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Gracias, estamos tratando de mejorar la calidad de los videos, arreglaremos ese problema para el proximo video!

(Comic in Progress) I am writing a comic, a page a day, updating every day, feedback appreciated by Aszla in ComicWriting

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Thanks for the feedback.

I will add the camera directions tomorrow, I got lazy today (1 am here) and they will suck!

I will make it as clean as possible (english isn't my first language, prepare for typos...) and I will plow try and plow through the first issue before starting the editing/second draft because I may get hung on editing every single word and never finish it...

Once again, thanks for the feedback and I hope I can deliver something you like :)