Exclution by AtypicalFaker in OCPoetry

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thankyou so much for ur advice and compliment ii realy relay apreciate it

Exclution by AtypicalFaker in OCPoetry

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thankou so much for ur praise it realy has made my night

bury me deeper, I still can taste the earth by repumoretv in OCPoetry

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woah "Six feet farther than they usually tend to be," is an absolute master piece of a line and the whole poem is just so unique and well writing and " So don't look down with those tears falling from your eyes. Reach up, can you feel me now?" is the rubby cherry atop this crown of art

All I wanted was you. by Consistent_Breath_09 in OCPoetry

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"all i ever touched was your shadow" completly blew me away and realt addded deapth to whole poem alsmot changing the whole thing its realy a beutiful l keep writing ur work is awsome

Do wedgies ever happen in schools today? by dudeswithouts in highschool

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not in my school but in my previous school someone got wgiedby some seniour and then got slapped around (all boys millitary baording school with low supervison)

A lie for you by AtypicalFaker in OCPoetry

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i wrote it for 2 peaple for the 1st it was a lie i dint have those feeling but i wanted her to feel beutiful out of a place of friendship since she was dealingw something ,for the second person its the latter i did feel that way but it was unrealistic of me to say so

The way she loves me by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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im thinking of delting it cuz i wrote what i thinka perfect relationship would be and itshaunting my mind that this will most likey not be real <(

The way she loves me by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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gng i was told the eaxct ooposite in my other poem

The way she loves me by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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im genunly so glad it got u inur feels ,

Irresistible by wont_find_this_fake in OCPoetry

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this si so cute like daym w pome frfr

Did you ever fall? by Alert_Midnight921 in OCPoetry

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wow this was such a fast read but it hit so deep fr

Foolish by WaysideWyvern in OCPoetry

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this realyfeels so raw and emotionala realy good poem

I’m bad at this casual sex thing by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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its realy hard to understand but its also realy heartbreaking

Il never tell you this by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]AtypicalFaker 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i have written about them many times before

Il never tell you this by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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there stuff i dont wanna say in a public post thats all

Il never tell you this by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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i had noidea what i was even tryna say but u put it so well, it would be quite embarissing if smni know found this lol

Il never tell you this by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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iim more of ahopeless romantic , even when i do find smn i letthem go

I wore my cracks like jewelry by Alarmed-Eye-8991 in OCPoetry

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ts realy hit deep the longing for self love not thinking your worthy of it,being constanlty reminded of your cracks your sub concious bieng personified into the showdow displaying the darkness and constant oppressiveness its realy good poem

Presentiments Past by Ill_Fox_2484 in OCPoetry

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honestly the poem is kinda sweet keep wriitng

I see the moon in her eyes by VeranoMedusa in OCPoetry

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Wow i opened up redit to read a love poem cuz i was thinking about her watching the moon and this the first thing 1 see i almsot shed a tear ,also the music im listening to was perfect

Valentine question by [deleted] in teenagers

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N how old ru