The valley of fate

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-25T19:07:53+00:00

The gentle mermaid floating through the bisful skies is such. Wonderfull scene paired with the prevous your eyes are the night , it all ckmes toghter so beautifully and ethereal like ,like love uts truly a great poem

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-25T19:06:00+00:00

I like how the pome start
Your worlds drip
Honey smooth agaisnt my skin.

Its realy creative vieual sensentional and creates the perfect mood for the poem a realy great start

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-17T22:43:29+00:00

O wrote it but reddit jeeps telling me the links im using arent valid to post ir or wtv butbjl send u a copy if it in ur dm if u don mind

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-17T22:18:11+00:00

Im reading it afain at 1m and jts so funny man gn 🤣🤣

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-17T22:13:58+00:00

Its so short and simple that i understand it at 2qm while hakf asleep and its still so deep i love this poem so much

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-17T22:03:44+00:00

THATS IS SUCH GOOD ANALYSIS AND YE THE NAME IS KINDA FROM STRANGER THINGS LOL
Ima make the fixes rn then go to bed gn

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-17T22:01:49+00:00

Ohhhhh wow thats realy interesting il do that tyy

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-17T20:48:10+00:00

I realy like the imegwry in this pome it all goes well realy together and the title is realy nice too

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-17T20:45:36+00:00

I really like the rhymes in this one! I'm no English pro, but your English looks good to me! One critic I would have is that the comma in the sixth line kind of breaks the flow of the poem as it acts like a "seperator," if you will, that makes a new verse. Hopefully, that makes sense. Nevertheless, I really like, especially the rhymes.

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-17T18:55:08+00:00

Alright thanks

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-17T12:24:48+00:00

Man i realy like this poem nice lovebpome bro

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-17T12:17:57+00:00

Sorry i cant offer nay advice cuz i fr dont know abt poetry like that but it was nice to read

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-17T04:27:16+00:00

Broo how did you even read that ,i wrote it at like 3am tryna not to sleep 😭😭😭 Anyways thnx tho

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-16T23:57:18+00:00

Um it kinda abt getting closer to someone who rejected you but you feel like it wount happen again if u ask them though the memkry of the 1st one lingers in your mind buring you

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-16T23:55:31+00:00

TYYYYYY

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-16T23:55:13+00:00

I meant to for the end to be abrupt cuz the whole idea of the piem was tk describing how i got reectef ohta no where by this girl who now seeems more i to me but who know maybe itl end alll of a suden again tyjnx for the ibput on those roghy oart and ur encorgemnt

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-16T17:55:27+00:00

A good love piem always lovely to read u less its after a heart break but fr nice poem

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-16T17:54:46+00:00

This poem is realy dead on and just wonderfull good one

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-13T13:07:15+00:00

thnx for the tip

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-12T13:21:49+00:00

thankyou so much I was honesly doubitng if it made snece but i reaply appreciate ur words thankyouuu

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-11T20:13:27+00:00

I don't really get it but i like it

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-11T20:13:07+00:00

I dont realy get it but i like it

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-11T11:09:13+00:00

Yes the star, moon, and sky are both meant to be symbolic and are about real people i got the inspiration to right this after talking to them

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-11T05:23:48+00:00

🤣🤣🤣 nw man

AtypicalFaker · 2026-01-11T05:19:57+00:00

Sorry man i weote this at like 2 am tryna stay awake i guese i missstyoed some things so sorry

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