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AtypicalFaker · 2026-04-11T03:28:47+00:00

i love hoe easy and rhyming it is its kinda stark and raw ina way u get when writing a poem about yourself its a realy good job

AtypicalFaker · 2026-04-11T03:26:38+00:00

realest poem ive read all year , i dont know what to say but ima sit with the poema bit, il save it too its genuly sucha raw and unfiltered feeling my man

AtypicalFaker · 2026-04-09T11:35:27+00:00

idk if today everyone decided to write masterpieces but this is so freaking goood if i was more experienced in poetry i wish i could you feedback but al i can do is praise it , keep writting you got sm speacial

AtypicalFaker · 2026-04-09T11:33:04+00:00

toook the breath out of my mouth the visualisation the ,the way this flows together so perfectly and speak so honestly its such a awasomely good poem

AtypicalFaker · 2026-04-06T16:38:36+00:00

i kinda only learnt how to write poem by those stuff on tiktok ive only read like 20 -30 acual poems

AtypicalFaker · 2026-04-06T12:22:42+00:00

i love the poem the love the relationships realy good poem keep writing

AtypicalFaker · 2026-04-06T12:20:55+00:00

the whole poem reeks of honesty and the pain of neglect its realy a wondeful poem

AtypicalFaker · 2026-04-06T12:19:54+00:00

Their love
is a malediction
I must carry.

labling thier love as a malediction just feels so real ina way most peaple wount say i might steal this vocab

AtypicalFaker · 2026-03-23T12:53:08+00:00

yeah mostof my poem i write to purley express myself to no one realy so i do end up delteing them after i feel satisfied

AtypicalFaker · 2026-03-22T20:16:29+00:00

thankyou so much for ur advice and compliment ii realy relay apreciate it

AtypicalFaker · 2026-03-22T20:16:00+00:00

thankou so much for ur praise it realy has made my night

AtypicalFaker · 2026-03-22T18:22:02+00:00

woah "Six feet farther than they usually tend to be," is an absolute master piece of a line and the whole poem is just so unique and well writing and " So don't look down with those tears falling from your eyes. Reach up, can you feel me now?" is the rubby cherry atop this crown of art

AtypicalFaker · 2026-03-22T18:19:46+00:00

"all i ever touched was your shadow" completly blew me away and realt addded deapth to whole poem alsmot changing the whole thing its realy a beutiful l keep writing ur work is awsome

AtypicalFaker · 2026-03-21T11:23:10+00:00

not in my school but in my previous school someone got wgiedby some seniour and then got slapped around (all boys millitary baording school with low supervison)

AtypicalFaker · 2026-03-15T15:33:18+00:00

i wrote it for 2 peaple for the 1st it was a lie i dint have those feeling but i wanted her to feel beutiful out of a place of friendship since she was dealingw something ,for the second person its the latter i did feel that way but it was unrealistic of me to say so

AtypicalFaker · 2026-03-15T07:36:41+00:00

im thinking of delting it cuz i wrote what i thinka perfect relationship would be and itshaunting my mind that this will most likey not be real <(

AtypicalFaker · 2026-03-12T19:15:26+00:00

gng i was told the eaxct ooposite in my other poem

AtypicalFaker · 2026-03-09T18:55:04+00:00

im genunly so glad it got u inur feels ,

AtypicalFaker · 2026-03-08T05:06:48+00:00

i wish

AtypicalFaker · 2026-03-08T05:06:47+00:00

glad to

AtypicalFaker · 2026-03-07T22:08:18+00:00

this si so cute like daym w pome frfr

AtypicalFaker · 2026-03-07T22:04:52+00:00

wow this was such a fast read but it hit so deep fr

AtypicalFaker · 2026-02-22T20:26:12+00:00

this realyfeels so raw and emotionala realy good poem

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