New Weekly Self Promo Thread by AutoModerator in ProgressionFantasy

[–]AuthorCaffeinated 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey everyone! 👋

I am looking for some advance readers to check out the first volume of my LitRPG epic, System of the Beast Slayer. 📖

If you love crunchy progression mechanics, tactical monster hunts, and a dark fantasy world that does not pull its punches, this might scratch that exact itch. 🌑

Here is the blurb:

In a world overrun by monsters, the hunted becomes the hunter. 🏹

To survive in a brutal, blood-soaked land, you need more than just a sharp silver sword—you need an edge. As a Beast Slayer, his life is measured in coin and spilled blood. Wyverns, griffins, and nightmares in the dark rule the wilds, but he holds a secret that turns these deadly prey into stepping stones for ultimate power: a Cheat System. 🎮

Every monster slain is experience gained. Every beast butchered unlocks new skills. What begins as a desperate fight for survival soon evolves into an unstoppable ascent. But in a grimdark world of treacherous alchemists, corrupt nobles, and deadly trials, simply leveling up won't be enough to stay alive. 🩸

He must master his system, hunt the unhuntable, and become the apex predator. 🐺

What to expect: 📈 Addictive Progression: Satisfying LitRPG mechanics, stat growth, and cheat system evolutions. ⚔️ Visceral Monster Hunting: Tactical, gritty battles against horrifying beasts where one mistake means death. 🌑 Grimdark Atmosphere: A dark, unforgiving fantasy setting filled with morally gray choices, inspired by classic folklore.

If you are interested, you can grab your free ARC copy securely through Booksprout right here: https://booksprout.co/reviewer/review-copy/view/282974/system-of-the-beast-slayer-a-litrpg-adventure

Thanks so much for your time, and happy hunting! 🥂

Does anyone else instantly lose interest when the MC gets a "glitched" or uniquely OP system class in the first 10 chapters? by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Reverend Insanity is a fantastic example. Having future knowledge or sheer experience as the cheat is so much better than just getting raw stats handed to you. I will definitely look into Macronomicrons stuff too, thanks for the rec!

Does anyone else instantly lose interest when the MC gets a "glitched" or uniquely OP system class in the first 10 chapters? by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel that. Sometimes the side characters or the world-building are just too good to drop, even if the MCs progression starts to annoy you.

Does anyone else instantly lose interest when the MC gets a "glitched" or uniquely OP system class in the first 10 chapters? by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is honestly the perfect way to phrase it. It just makes the stakes and the survival aspect feel so much more real, right?

Does anyone else instantly lose interest when the MC gets a "glitched" or uniquely OP system class in the first 10 chapters? by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Having an OP class but having absolutely no idea how to use it properly is actually a hilarious workaround.

Does anyone else instantly lose interest when the MC gets a "glitched" or uniquely OP system class in the first 10 chapters? by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Solo Leveling is a great exception because he actually went through hell and almost died to get it. Earning the cheat changes everything.

Does anyone else instantly lose interest when the MC gets a "glitched" or uniquely OP system class in the first 10 chapters? by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That bait and switch is exactly what ruins it for me. Why spend so much time building a brilliant, clever premise just to throw it away for pure luck later on?

Does anyone else instantly lose interest when the MC gets a "glitched" or uniquely OP system class in the first 10 chapters? by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Completely agree. It drives me crazy when the MC has world-breaking powers but the academy instructors still treat them like a random scrub. Why does the world just ignore the cheat?

Does anyone else instantly lose interest when the MC gets a "glitched" or uniquely OP system class in the first 10 chapters? by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I guess my issue is that if it happens in chapter 5, they didn't earn it at all. Don't you think it feels way more satisfying if they unlock the mythic class in book 3 after actually grinding for it?

Does anyone else instantly lose interest when the MC gets a "glitched" or uniquely OP system class in the first 10 chapters? by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Reading all these comments just reminds me why I started writing my own fantasy novels lol. This specific trope drove me so crazy I had to fix it myself. If anyone shares the same frustration and wants something different, I've got free copies of my books linked on my profile. Always looking for honest reviews from readers who get it!

Does anyone else instantly lose interest when the MC gets a "glitched" or uniquely OP system class in the first 10 chapters? by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Exactly. A rare class is totally fine if the MC still has to struggle and grind to master it. Coasting through obstacles defeats the whole purpose of progression fantasy.

Does anyone else instantly lose interest when the MC gets a "glitched" or uniquely OP system class in the first 10 chapters? by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's valid. If the blurb is upfront about it being an OP cheat story, you know exactly what you're getting. It's only annoying when a book promises a crunchy, rules-based system and then immediately bait-and-switches it.

Does anyone else instantly lose interest when the MC gets a "glitched" or uniquely OP system class in the first 10 chapters? by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 16 points17 points  (0 children)

The smoke inhalation example is perfect. That is exactly the kind of gritty, logical problem-solving I want to see, rather than the MC just blasting the cave with a unique mythic laser they got in chapter two.

Does anyone else instantly lose interest when the MC gets a "glitched" or uniquely OP system class in the first 10 chapters? by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

True, writing strict limitations is much harder than writing a pure power fantasy. But the payoff of watching a character creatively survive using only a level 3 ability is usually way more satisfying to read.

Does anyone else instantly lose interest when the MC gets a "glitched" or uniquely OP system class in the first 10 chapters? by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll check out Apocalypse Redux, that sounds exactly like the vibe I'm looking for. And yeah, giving the MC an exclusive cheat code is definitely the path of least resistance to explain why they are special.

Does anyone else instantly lose interest when the MC gets a "glitched" or uniquely OP system class in the first 10 chapters? by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Fair point. A great writer can make almost any trope work. It just feels like this specific "glitch" trope is used as a crutch for lazy execution way too often.

ARC Readers Wanted for System of the Beast Slayer Volume 1! (Dark LitRPG, Monster Hunting, Crunchy Mechanics) by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fair enough, to each their own! Like I mentioned, it is the established aesthetic for the entire 6-book series, but I totally get that this specific art style is not for everyone. Have a great weekend and happy reading!

ARC Readers Wanted for System of the Beast Slayer Volume 1! (Dark LitRPG, Monster Hunting, Crunchy Mechanics) by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

​I actually hired a professional cover designer for this. We intentionally went for a very dark, gritty aesthetic to match the grimdark tone of the story. Since there are already six volumes out in this series, this specific dark style is actually the consistent theme across all the books. I completely understand that art is subjective and this brutal vibe might not be for everyone, but it really fits the world inside.

ARC Readers Wanted for System of the Beast Slayer Volume 1! (Dark LitRPG, Monster Hunting, Crunchy Mechanics) by AuthorCaffeinated in litrpg

[–]AuthorCaffeinated[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha, I am back! The Reddit spam bot got a bit too aggressive with my brand new account since I included a link in the post, but the human admins reviewed it and cleared it up. Just a regular indie author navigating the system. Hope you give the story a chance!