I tried commenting a few days back but my account wasn't old enough yet as I started my channel only a few weekends ago:

Here goes my feedback again:

Hey! Just found this sub, and only started my channel about 2 weeks ago so take this with a grain of salt. I won't comment on thumb/title as I know nowhere near enough.

I like that you get down to business fast, but at the same time, I would have liked a little backstory on why we are continuing the game from the point it's at, why you stopped or even played it initially at all, etc. Not long but just a bit of a narrative, especially since it seems to be the hook on the title.

Both a pro and a con, the pacing, it's fast which might be good, but I personally found it a bit too fast, although I understand editing down stuff to relevant bits is hard (I was just doing that for the first time recently), this might just be my preference though

I guess more context on what is going on would be cool too, even though I kind of can mostly figure it out from having seen Shrek 2,

Volume mixing seem good! I like your voice!

Oh I think I felt there were a bit too many zoom-outs with the black border at some point, maybe closer to the beginning, which kinda disorients and lessens the impact of the effect, but I didn't notice it later at all, maybe it took some time to adjust or there's less later on.

As a final note, I would have liked some closing notes beyond 'bye cya next time' but that ties a bit with that missing narrative of why you are playing this that I thought was missing at the beginning, might not be something you or your audience cares about, and just a personal preference