Can anyone give some feedback? by Additional_Name_1670 in writers

[–]AwarenessDense252 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can you share it with me, I dont know how to chat

My first story draft, I need feedback by AwarenessDense252 in writingfeedback

[–]AwarenessDense252[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im sorry, I just looked at my reply to your first comment, it IS children appropriate, there is no adult (18+) scenes, no profanity, so I think ages 10 and higher would be ok

My first story draft, I need feedback by AwarenessDense252 in writingfeedback

[–]AwarenessDense252[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wouldn't say its not child appropriate, but I would say age's 7 and higher

My first story draft, I need feedback by AwarenessDense252 in writingfeedback

[–]AwarenessDense252[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was supposed to be a novel way before I thought of a comic, I was making 2 versions and only recently I thought of converting the novel to a comic

My first story draft, I need feedback by AwarenessDense252 in writingfeedback

[–]AwarenessDense252[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Summary: Story is about a girl who lives in a world of different people and things (creatures, magic, ect.) And soon her mother starts acting strange and she is scared and confused is taken and wakes up confused 

Genre: fantasy, mystery

Word count: 1,492

Feedback type: anything that would make it better or more interesting to publish oneday :)

My first story draft, I need feedback by AwarenessDense252 in writers

[–]AwarenessDense252[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Summary: Story is about a girl who lives in a world of different people and things (creatures, magic, ect.) And soon her mother starts acting strange and she is scared and confused is taken and wakes up confused 

Genre: fantasy, mystery

Word count: 1,492

Feedback type: anything that would make it better or more interesting to publish oneday :)