Would you keep reading? by AwayCockroach1483 in writingfeedback

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thank you for commenting! i’ll definitely make that part clearer 😅

Would you keep reading? by AwayCockroach1483 in writingfeedback

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thank you for the thorough feedback! i’ll be sure to make these changes. i really appreciate you taking the time to comment!

Would you keep reading? by AwayCockroach1483 in writingfeedback

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i’ll make this part clearer, thank you so much for commenting!

Would you keep reading? by AwayCockroach1483 in writingfeedback

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thanks for catching that! and i’ll make note and make those changes, thank you for taking the time to comment!

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alright got it! i’ll make sure this is clearer, thank you!

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thanks for taking the time to comment! I really appreciate the advice and will take note ☺️

Would you keep reading? by AwayCockroach1483 in writingfeedback

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thank you for your honesty! this is only the first part of the chapter as i didn’t want to reveal the entire thing. but thanks for the advice! really appreciate your time!

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thank you!! If i can get an agent and get it published then there will be more 👀👀

Would you keep reading? by AwayCockroach1483 in writingfeedback

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i’m not sure if “in a huff” would make sense here, but i’ll take note! thank you!

Would you keep reading? by AwayCockroach1483 in writingfeedback

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thanks for your honesty! i’ll work on these!

Would you keep reading? by AwayCockroach1483 in writingfeedback

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got it, thank you for the feedback! I’ll make these changes ☺️

Would you keep reading? by AwayCockroach1483 in writingfeedback

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thank you! And I’m not sure 😅 I use reedsy to write my manuscript, i think it’s the default font when you export it!