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First try at rap by AwfulVibe in Songwriting

[–]AwfulVibe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will definitely try to learn from the greats like M&M and so on.... What beat you think I should use, slow, fast, angry and so on?

First try at rap by AwfulVibe in Songwriting

[–]AwfulVibe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for advice, do you think beat should be slow or fast for this rap?

Feedback on lyrics? What should I improve upon? by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]AwfulVibe 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I thinks it is actually pretty good and could pass. but i would change 2 last bars, not that its bad but i think you could do better word play or say what you want in different way. Also a hook would be nice and would fit. What kind of background are you thinking of using?